In the Time it Takes to Say Goodbye
In the time it takes
to breathe a sigh
In the time it takes
to close both eyes
In the time it takes
to draw a breath
In the time it takes
to get undressed
In the time it takes
a clock to stop
In the time it takes
to pick a lock
In the time it takes
to kiss her breasts
in the time it takes
to lift her dress
In the time it takes
to form a smile
in the time it takes
to wait a while
In the time it takes
to make a wish
in the time it takes
to blow a kiss
In the time it takes
to wonder why
is the time it takes
to say goodbye
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Author:
Neville (
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Erm, if 'goodbye' is the hardest word, I will say 'hello' to ya! lol.
I've swooned now - stanza 4. heehee.
if stanza 4 turned you on that much Mr. O then maybe I should pen something that would either make your fur fall out, or put you in a coma .. 🐭😎🐭🦨🐧
In the time it takes to read your poem, I got me a good rhythm going....
Enjoyed, Nev.
You are indeed a poet sir Dog .. thank you 👍oh' and that little yellow icon is meant to be a thumbs up, by the way
Just as well you made that clear................................😇!!!
Am glad the time it took to note the lilt in this lively ode giving me another view of crafted rhyming. Quietly insightful this piece of gentle erotica Nev.....x
thanks for always being here when I need ya Fay ... x
I fear, Hyung
few
will realise the depths
of yearning, hidden
in this most, affecting
work, their loss..
thank you!
such a tender poem n wording of ache
'the fifty shades of sincerity's, poetic angst'
(in Time
aching, wondrous memories
all that we'll have left, while
it Takes
poetic bravery, to word our discontent
to this distortion of sensation;
our heart's, convinced
we're but days removed from
that idyllic, scene
until, an untimely mirror
reminds us, its all a past
we can hardly picture...)
it seems you can still see write through me .. thanks brother Mek and ever so truly
Your replies are always so beautiful
Love this one, course Im a sucker for rhymes.. Heartfelt sentiments,
for time passes so quickly
When I’m staring in your eyes
Just like a magician,
The minutes quickly go by
A quick caress and touch
Then it’s time to say goodbye
you got me babe & I thank you for it .. 💜
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