Why oh why were we born to die
Is that why at birth babies cry
It use to be they smacked their bums. Probably child abuse today.
Yes they did. I guess they don't have to anymore the fear must be greater. Thanks for the read and comment.
You've summed up in just two perfect lines a question that lurks in the deepest recesses of our minds. We shed the first tears of many to come.
Thanks so much Bella for the most kind remarks. Yes indeed many tears of sadness, pain, laughter and joy.
crazy, how our write's align in theme, so often kind Poet 'were we made for this? for just this? we were made to surpass this!'
Thank you L.B. maybe this alignment accounts for why your poems touch so close to my heart, I appreciate your review.
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It use to be they smacked their bums. Probably child abuse today.
Yes they did. I guess they don't have to anymore the fear must be greater. Thanks for the read and comment.
You've summed up in just two perfect lines a question that lurks in the deepest recesses of our minds. We shed the first tears of many to come.
Thanks so much Bella for the most kind remarks. Yes indeed many tears of sadness, pain, laughter and joy.
crazy, how our write's
align in theme, so often
kind Poet
'were we made for this?
for just this?
we were made to surpass
this!'
Thank you L.B. maybe this alignment accounts for why your poems touch so close to my heart, I appreciate your review.
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