The spot on the wall

sorenbarrett

From the rain that did fall

There came a stain on the wall

A dark spot buried in the board

That struck a deep emotional chord

 

A vacilating countenance, in wood, you could see

Caused by a change in humidity

A face, that would predict the happenings of the day

One fallen from grace, some would say

 

A simple darkening in the grain

Which would predict joy or pain

When with a frown it was clad

What would follow was always sad

 

When the visage appeared enraged

That day, all hell would be engaged

When a smile it displays

It would foretell of better days

 

From one's own mind it did declare

Whether happieness or despair

Like a Rorschach card it would project

One's soul, that one tries to protect

 

With brushes and soap we tried to erase

The vestiges of this Mephistophelian face

But with each intrepid try

Darker would become the demonic dye

 

When to the spot people grew near

From its look they would turn in fear

Because of people's dire dread

The blemish was hidden behind a bed

 

Still, the curious would steal a glance

That their future they could see, perchance

But in pursuing this Cassandran romance

With their own ghost they would dance

 

Watching a movie that you know the end

Knowing things from which you can not defend

Of all, the worst terror comes from inside

Like the spot, our fears, we can not, but try to hide

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 10th, 2023 21:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was an event that happened years ago in my house in Brazil as attested to by my children. After completing the poem I looked up and found a story by E.V. Lucas called “The face on the wall” written many years ago that bears a strange similarity. There is nothing new under the sun. Cassandra in Greek mythology was given the gift of prophesy but the inability to alter what would happen or convince others of its validity
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Hey Soren - a missed opportunity: (I'm assuming others could see it, not just you and family): Some serious publicity, charge an admission fee (or maybe a tithe) and what have you? a steady income or a new religion.....😇!!!

  • sorenbarrett

    Thanks Dave the thought had passed my mind. Rented a room to a church once that were selling land in heaven and if one did not have enough money to buy a plot they would sell you a chair. All the good thoughts are already taken.

  • L. B. Mek

    Brilliant!

    'Like a Rorschach card it would project
    One's soul, that one tries to protect

    With brushes and soap we tried to erase
    The vestiges of this Mephistophelian face
    But with each intrepid try
    Darker would become the demonic dye

    When to the spot people grew near
    From its look they would turn in fear'

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks so much L.B. for the review of this tale.



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