Sundowner's Dream

hacklec

Leaning in the doorway

branches reach for the breeze

to sweep the tide in my room.

While the sun moors
the light kindles in my room

then wanders into night.

You trace my thoughts
with leaves that roam through evenings

spread beneath the sky.

The cold of the streams of a violin

nearly freeze the trees,

as the bed begins to soothe

and the sun releases its lines.

  • Author: Chris H (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 12th, 2023 23:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: Okay finally got a transfer to where you are... I wanted you to hold my eyes in your arms and curl the pages of our hearts into the tide. Time to unfurl some sails...
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  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • L. B. Mek

    Brilliant!
    I bow to your superior talent, dear Poet!
    (hope it all works out)

    • hacklec

      That's nice of you to say! I've been trying to represent the story of my chasing my wife down from Barstow to Ventura CA (after I met her in college) in a poem form so almost there!



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