On the wheel of fortune of life
I've had more than my share of winners
And luckily a dearth of pain and strife
Lotsa love and some unforgettable dinners
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Author:
hzugman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Lucky me.
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You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in perspective, makes it a little less abstract. And equating it (indirectly) with dinners reminds us how miraculous even small pleasures and a little social company make life rich.
Thank you J54. To be honest, I was so subtle on this poem that I didn't even catch the comparison myself. My poems just sorta flow without my trying to sus out what they mean.
That's a fine way to do it! I am so the opposite. Nothing is ever good enough! I like your style!
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