It doesn't hurt to be lucky

hzugman

On the wheel of fortune of life

I've had more than my share of winners

And luckily a dearth of pain and strife

Lotsa love and some unforgettable dinners

 

  • Author: hzugman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 14th, 2023 09:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Lucky me.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • jarcher54

    You can be so subtle! Making love and dinners parallel puts love in perspective, makes it a little less abstract. And equating it (indirectly) with dinners reminds us how miraculous even small pleasures and a little social company make life rich.

    • hzugman

      Thank you J54. To be honest, I was so subtle on this poem that I didn't even catch the comparison myself. My poems just sorta flow without my trying to sus out what they mean.

      • jarcher54

        That's a fine way to do it! I am so the opposite. Nothing is ever good enough! I like your style!



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