Rain Smell



The smell of rain makes my body whimper 

Wanna release the feeling, but my body just grows stiffer

I never feel the pain on time, it always comes to early or too late

Don’t wanna act how I used to, begging for a clean slate 

 My tears I beg would fall down my face like rain 

So I could move on without feeling the continuous searing pain 

However it still ebbs and flows 

And I have no control over when it comes and goes

  • Author: jewelwrites55 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 16th, 2023 18:49
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 7


  • L. B. Mek

    tears cleanse, as much as they scar
    let your rivers of hurt n regret
    simply flow, kind poet
    let it all wash away
    rather than trying to repress it
    stagnant water, poisons us
    unshed tear's, weaken us
    poetry is such a great vehicle
    we can ink out our worries n fears
    rage at that blank canvas
    or caress it, like we wish
    someone would comfort us
    we must all, learn
    to utilise our Art!
    stay strong

    • jewelwrites55

      Thank you for your support and kind words, I couldn’t agree more !!!

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