You belittled her, demonized her, and made her feel like the lowest human on earth. You made her feel as if she was not even worthy of self love. You were wrong! She is worthy! She is powerful! She is amazing! You cannot take that away from her. She is taking back the power she gave you. You did not take it. She gave it to you. No longer will you control her. No longer will you hurt her. No longer will you own her. She is in control now. She owns her life. God has her back and you will not bring her down. She is unstoppable and she will prove it.
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brandiem88 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about being broken, finding myself, and healing.
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I read your poem several times and enjoyed each reading. I like the way you are assertive and that you are controlled by no one but God and the Savior. Don't make the mistake of denying good inluences also. I think you have a bright fiture as a poet and writer. Glad to see that you have transcended many of your problems.
Have you written any gospel, sacred poems ? I bet you could write a fine poem expressing love for the Father and the Son.
If I can be of any help or support I will gladly try.
I would greatly appreciate any help you have to offer. I have only recently picked up writing again. I used to write gospel songs/poems as a teenager, but steered away from it for many years. I am also extremely grateful for your positive feedback. It really means so much to me.
hello again, glad to get your reply
If you don\'t already, I would suggest that you get a composition, notebook,
and write down poetic ideas. It made be a phrase, a \"hook\", or it may be a
subject. It might be a few lines of a new poem. Just remember, if you get started, you can finish the poem.
Sometimes when I had a temporary writer\'s block, I would lay down
and this helped me find the words for the poem. When writing sacred poems,
a lot of the inspiration comes from the Lord.
If you\'d like, I could send you a few of my ideas or hooks . I have dozens of
them.If you have stumbling's or blocks, tell me about that and I might be of
some help. May give you aid with the poetic process.
you can reach me, Charlie (Charles69) at [email protected]
I am also a songwriter and if you were interested in such , I might be a
good resource for that. Really , songwriting is the most profitable poetic vocation, and I
guess you are concerned about that like all of us writers.
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