Oh! These wondrous hands of mine
Life created with every stroke
Oh! These hands divine
Across universe stars align
Hail praise deity spoke
Oh! These wondrous hands of mine
To create ethereal design
In aether they soak
Oh! These hands divine
Neither verse nor wine
Liken emotions evoke
Oh! These wondrous hands of mine
Unmortal something so fine
Envy of all townsfolk
Oh! These wondrous hands of mine
Make love and misery intertwine
Unmatched when awoke
Oh! These wondrous hands of mine
Oh! These hands divine
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Author:
Addy (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 18th, 2023 01:11
- Comment from author about the poem: Its my first time writing a villanelle. Hows it? Tear it apart when you critique
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments2
I'm gonna sing it - 'You need hands'. A song about 5 million years old - find it on You Tube I expect. lol.
ill check it out
As I say it's about 5 million years old - or seems like it. lol.
Now I'm sure you are a skilled volleyball striker ..
And that tint of words coquetry. ..
Thanks !
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