Ethereal Hands

Addy

Oh! These wondrous hands of mine

Life created with every stroke

Oh! These hands divine

 

Across universe stars align

Hail praise deity spoke

Oh! These wondrous hands of mine

 

To create ethereal design

In aether they soak

Oh! These hands divine

 

Neither verse nor wine

Liken emotions evoke

Oh! These wondrous hands of mine

 

Unmortal something so fine

Envy of all townsfolk

Oh! These wondrous hands of mine

 

Make love and misery intertwine

Unmatched when awoke

Oh! These wondrous hands of mine

Oh! These hands divine

  • Author: Addy (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 18th, 2023 01:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Its my first time writing a villanelle. Hows it? Tear it apart when you critique
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments2

  • orchidee

    I'm gonna sing it - 'You need hands'. A song about 5 million years old - find it on You Tube I expect. lol.

    • Addy

      ill check it out

      • orchidee

        As I say it's about 5 million years old - or seems like it. lol.

      • Myth

        Now I'm sure you are a skilled volleyball striker ..
        And that tint of words coquetry. ..

        • Addy

          Thanks !



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