Washed ashore
A seamless shore
A sea of dreams
beckons me closer
Undiscovered depths
draw me closer
Yet each time I dive
I'm washed ashore
Like an untouched pearl
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Your words evoke a sense of longing and yearning for exploration, but also a feeling of frustration and disappointment at being repeatedly washed ashore. It's as if you are a pearl that is meant to be discovered, but each attempt to reach your true potential is met with resistance.
Perhaps it's a reminder that the journey towards self-discovery and fulfillment is not always easy or straightforward. But like a pearl that requires effort and patience to extract from its shell, your true potential may require perseverance and determination to uncover.
Keep diving, keep exploring, and don't be discouraged by the setbacks along the way. Who knows what treasures you may find in the undiscovered depths.
Thank you dear poet😍
wonderful imagery
a pearl, is an elegant embodiment
of Nature's intricate elegance
what a wonderful metaphor
as a self image..
a lovely read, dear poet
Thank you🥰🥰
The lovely picture of the pearl melds so beautifully with the imagery of your words that it takes me to that peaceful shore. This truly is a pearl as are you dear poet.
Thank you so much🥰
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