Washed ashore


Washed ashore

A seamless shore

A sea of dreams 

beckons me closer

Undiscovered depths

draw me closer

Yet each time I dive

I'm washed ashore

Like an untouched pearl


  • Author: Poetic persona (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 18th, 2023 06:00
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 12


  • Mello

    Your words evoke a sense of longing and yearning for exploration, but also a feeling of frustration and disappointment at being repeatedly washed ashore. It's as if you are a pearl that is meant to be discovered, but each attempt to reach your true potential is met with resistance.

    Perhaps it's a reminder that the journey towards self-discovery and fulfillment is not always easy or straightforward. But like a pearl that requires effort and patience to extract from its shell, your true potential may require perseverance and determination to uncover.

    Keep diving, keep exploring, and don't be discouraged by the setbacks along the way. Who knows what treasures you may find in the undiscovered depths.

    • thinkerbell

      Thank you dear poet😍

    • L. B. Mek

      wonderful imagery
      a pearl, is an elegant embodiment
      of Nature's intricate elegance
      what a wonderful metaphor
      as a self image..
      a lovely read, dear poet

    • Bella Shepard

      The lovely picture of the pearl melds so beautifully with the imagery of your words that it takes me to that peaceful shore. This truly is a pearl as are you dear poet.

      • thinkerbell

        Thank you so much🥰

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