Oh to walk through this life
unbothered, unfettered
By the thoughts of what could be better
To bypass the chattering of teeth I need to endure to travel this weather.
I once dreamt a dream of a time I felt so
grand and tall
I saw masses of objects float towards the clouds
Equations flickered in my vision
as if there
but not really... like the things we can't touch passing through air
While at the center of this awe
inspiring
Scene to which I've been enthralled,
Hanged an eye
in the beautiful blue sky
glaring at me and the world as if judging us
all at sunrise
I can't help but think what it
meant to speak
Maybe it could've helped me in this
journey I seek
But what it meant I fear that I've
missed the beat
My eyes feel so tired and my will
Seems more weak.
Tho I don't know the outcome of this path
Beneath my feet
I know it to at least be the one thing
I need complete.
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Author:
Eldian_Devil137 (
Offline) - Published: March 20th, 2023 18:39
- Comment from author about the poem: Hey, I don't know much about writing poems so if there's errors or stuff like that lemme know please.😅
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Comments2
All got to start somewhere, although I think you know a little more than you are letting on.... so you can read this as 'reward' -
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-155194
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Thanks! I've always written myself rhymes from time to time but would never really show them to people or keep em for long for that matter haha. I normally just end up throwing away what I write.
wonderful flow, a lovely read
thanks for sharing
Thank you!
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