Oh to walk through this life 
unbothered, unfettered
By the thoughts of what could be better
To bypass the chattering of teeth I need to endure to travel this weather.

I once dreamt a dream of a time I felt so
grand and tall
I saw masses of objects float towards the clouds
Equations flickered in my vision
 as if there
 but not really... like the things we can't touch passing through air

While at the center of this awe
 Scene to which I've been enthralled,
Hanged an eye
 in the beautiful blue sky 
glaring at me and the world as if judging us
all at sunrise 

I can't help but think what it
 meant to speak 
Maybe it could've helped me in this
 journey I seek
But what it meant I fear that I've
 missed the beat
My eyes feel so tired and my will
Seems more weak.
Tho I don't know the outcome of this path 
Beneath my feet
I know it to at least be the one thing 
I need complete.

  • Author: Eldian_Devil137 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 20th, 2023 18:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hey, I don't know much about writing poems so if there's errors or stuff like that lemme know please.😅
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 11


  • Doggerel Dave

    All got to start somewhere, although I think you know a little more than you are letting on.... so you can read this as 'reward' -


    Enjoy your stay at MPS. It is an interactive site and works best when poets read and comment on other's works and respond to comments on their own.

    • Eldian_Devil137

      Thanks! I've always written myself rhymes from time to time but would never really show them to people or keep em for long for that matter haha. I normally just end up throwing away what I write.

    • L. B. Mek

      wonderful flow, a lovely read
      thanks for sharing

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