broken skin

chains linked

half words

half shadows

faint farewells

angry chatter

guilt and truth

recaptured memory

ghosts and storms

paths to roads

bright sorrows

soft laughter

seasons discarded

partial escape

ashes raining

discovering loss

setting sun

the circle ends

  • Author: shadow424 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 20th, 2023 20:10
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
  • User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.


  • David Wakeling

    Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I'm not good and Spelling .Why not write proper sentences

  • L. B. Mek

    where brevity reigns
    archaic orthodoxy fails
    be it in art
    or ignorance's profane..
    (an engaging, demanding read
    to contemplate
    each line, a window to wisdom
    and self reflective, discovery)
    thanks for sharing, dear poet
    write however you want
    (loved this lines:
    'soft laughter
    seasons discarded
    partial escape
    ashes raining')

    • shadow424

      Thank you for your comments. I always appreciate hearing from you

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