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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 21st, 2023 09:22
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Loved this short piece. Hope you are not in this state. It's metaphor is deep in that the light once shed in life now turns to smoke and black. A finalization but also a mark of our past existence. In raising many would think of the soul as it separates from the body, going up to where many see as heaven. I prefer to see it as a transformation and a lasting memory. Lovely

    • arqios

      Am hoping as well as it isn't a permanent state. Many thanks Soren.

    • orchidee

      Me carpet is stained each Christmas morning with soot. I knows that much. Some fat guy comes down the chimney once a year. Dunno how he fits in. He must chuck the presents down the chimney, causing the soot in me lounge.
      Summat like that! lol.

      • arqios

        Red felt? Tufts of white fur?



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