Problems arising
Look over there
Can you see it
Do you care
To give of our substance
Is for us to decide
Don't be fooled
By the spin
And the lies
Give to your neighbour
Love your neighbour
Is what he said
Look after the widow
And those in distress
The ones around us
It's them we bless
He loves a cheerful giver
And can't be outdone
Test him on this
He owns it all
He will repay
That's for sure
We can solve the problems
If we take on the task
The worker us worthy
With no need to ask.
- Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 23rd, 2023 01:31
- Comment from author about the poem: Today I gave something precious away and found double!
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 30
Comments6
Erm, it's no problem for me to say this is a good write! Did you know I would say that? lol.
Of course, keep up the good work!
The challenge in a problem is the testing that proves. Good stuff here.
Your right, again.
Amen! They say a gift from caring comes back two-fold, and you seem to have proven that today. A very generous write full of truth.
Makes perfect sense...
True common sense...
Your neighbour destroys your life...
love him.
You neighbour murders your parents... love him.
Your neighbour tortures, murders your friends... love him.
Your neighbours rape and murder your wife, husband... whatever...
love him
Your neighbour rapes and murders your children... love him.
love him. love him. love him.
Turn the other cheek... always.
Nothing but love...
Nothing but love.
Heaps coals on their head, he said.
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