How gray it can stay despite the suns rays, all the beauty in the world hidden within many shades
Such is life the winds say! each chosen path we must stray, some to abandon others lead to go play
When most quests completed still leaves a rumbling down below, echoes above in the chambers mask more of the glow
My soul strolls dormant until all the kaleidoscope moments build up, leaving behind a distorted vision and erupt into a strut
Trapped in fragments of my poetic side, where the tears run from an ocean to dry on the cheek of a frown or a smile
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ! Keep up the write. Much peace and respect!
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Great piece Dan,
Despite the beauty in the world we can't but feel and see only Grey at times, other times we see all the colors of the rainbow so vibrant and beautiful
Goes to show you that life can give you anything, just don't let the dullness consume you and overtake the beauty
You know this feeling well and I always know there will be light at the end, even if it's just pretend.
Rainbows come when you least expect them!
Thank you for your time my friend, truly appreciated
Always with much peace and respect
I do know it well, it's a struggle to see the beauty in everything, but I always try to
Brilliant!
(We seek solace, idolising a past
fearing future's, as yet unrealised
in this now, graced by a brilliant
Sunset
as reminder to that we treasure
few, witness
this grace within breath we've been
afforded
few, understand
tis now, not our next that matters
most!)
I've now read this 3 times trying to see what you see. Always a pleasure to be inspired by your words, and help my mind become more open as many moments I retreat back to what I feel those words mean.
Much peace and respect
Always appreciated
stay strong brother, walk proud
smile wide, looking up
at that moody cloud
embracing those umbrellas in your life
fck the rest!
Wonderful write! I get trapped in the grey sometimes and have to remind myself the sun exists.
Absolutely love the name and thank you so much for your time
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