Solitude's Serenity

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In the quiet of the night,

When all the world is still,

I find a peace that feels just right,

A calmness that can thrill.

 

While others gaze up at the stars,

And marvel at the moon,

I revel in the peace that's ours,

A stillness that can swoon.

 

The solitude that fills my heart,

As darkness descends around,

Is like a soothing work of art,

A solace that I've found.

 

For in this moment, all is calm,

And nothing else exists,

No stress, no worry, and no qualm,

Just peace that truly persists.

 

So while the world may love the night,

For its stars and shining light,

I'll take my solitude, so bright,

And revel in its peaceful might.

  • Author: Zunaira Uzair (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 24th, 2023 04:45
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • L. B. Mek

    Brilliant!
    (I read and learn, dear Poet
    and bow to your superior talent
    please forgive my feeble attempt
    at a poetic reply, thank you!
    for inspiring me
    this, a most treasured gift)
    'flight's within poetic might
    reading solace
    as fatalistic, refrain's of hope
    a dream shared
    devoid of proximity's grace
    or comfort,
    I too, drink deep from humility
    alone
    yet adorned by that wondrous
    feel
    of connectedness, in Spinoza's
    oneness
    a legacy of yearning to unveil
    my life's
    legacy of worth and meaning
    inking
    futile words as my QEWRTY
    defiance
    assuming, in each facsimile
    of a poem
    I may yet conquer, this hollowness
    defining
    my life's most soothing, serenity
    a sanctity
    of aloneness, amongst Nature's
    abundance...!'

    • heartbones20

      OH MY GOD... This has to be my all-time favourite comment!! Might as well be better than the poem... well-done fellow poet nicely structured and heart-touching! Thank you so much!

      • L. B. Mek

        no dear Poet, tis we that thank you!
        for choosing to share your wonderful talent

        • heartbones20

          Thank yu !

        • AuburnScribbler

          Bravo for this poem heartbones20, the smooth rhythm of it tells me, that you truly like your own space, to which I do too, for there's too much noise in the modern day, so a much needed "me time" is very much warranted.

          Masterfully written, thank you for sharing, and I hope that all is well!

          • heartbones20

            Thank you so much for reading it! i appreciate your kind words. :>



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