……I gave you life….. But now I got to die, and leave all life’s beauty behind, this is torture. Why did creation need an audience, a short time at life, then your babies complete the breakthrough, if that ain’t enough to make you think, you don’t get another turn to feel life’s burn, some say we here to learn, but what use is lessons, if our whole species’s gone, rather by nuclear war, or meteor, then all of life will convert back to dirt floors and no doors, and no planes that soar, only thing that remains unchanged is the earth’s core. Spontaneous evolution, nature’s way of computing, it had no consciousness or a nosy old lady to raise the blinds on this, but yet and still it made consciousness, an observer threw a curve ball at this thing called creation, cause now we looking for some explanations, surely there’s gonna be some incorrect contemplations, consciousness comes with fears and anxieties, it’s like light from a bulb, but it’s it’s own entity, it creates friends or enemies, it’s aim is to perceive and make sense of all things, from a atom to our own brains, but in the end, where’s the gain, if it’s already in life’s cards to hit the reset button again.
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woah the thought that went into this! captures so much in a few mere lines
It’s all interconnected, one thing feeds off another, life eats life, unto death.
It is not "got" to die.It should be "have" to die.Learn English before you try to write poetry.There are too many errors to bother reading
Good grammar don’t always make good poetry; that’s like thinking information makes you smart; only a idiot would think that…
“Have got to can only be used in the present. Have to can be used in a variety of forms: I've got to study for the exam.”
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/have-got-to-and-have-to
It looks like you wrong anyway.
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