It died


When it died it all went black 

Nothing could I see 

Friendships formed

Contacts torn

Gloom and misery 

All lost

At what cost 

Despair fell over me

But praise the Lord 

My phones alright 

Just the battery. 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 26th, 2023 05:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28


  • Fay Slimm.

    Ah - I love the surprise finalé to this engaging word- use - -- thanks for sharing and for my wide smile.

    • 2781

      I am glad you enjoyed it. It's not all doom and gloom! Thank you.

    • Eugene S.

      That got a laugh. Nice twist!

      • 2781

        It was like a resurrection

      • Olaf Gatermann

        There is a smart book around here: "What can poetry do? Everything."

        • 2781

          We can hopefully do our bit? Thanks for the compliment. Cheers

        • Doggerel Dave

          The have beaten me to the draw above.. A fun shortie.

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