I think I read into this piece the shattering effect we have upon this world, with unforseen consequences that can leave scortched earth in their wake. I hope I haven't misinterpreted, but find these three lines quite powerful.
Traditionally power comes from on high. Many tremble at hidden power sheathed by obscuring clouds. This may leave those below parched. But then again maybe I reach too far and it is a majestic site and nothing more
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A yon-der good poem CB.
"round yon virgin mother and child..."
I think I read into this piece the shattering effect we have upon this world, with unforseen consequences that can leave scortched earth in their wake. I hope I haven't misinterpreted, but find these three lines quite powerful.
An only too valid reading, dear Bella. Thanks kindly for giving your time and thoughts, these are much appreciated and always welcome.
Traditionally power comes from on high. Many tremble at hidden power sheathed by obscuring clouds. This may leave those below parched. But then again maybe I reach too far and it is a majestic site and nothing more
That is so insightful Soren! Thanks kindly.
now just let that be a warming to you all folks ..
Or a well done shall ensue...
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