Am i happy??
I am just way too happy and excited
I believe I found someone
who make me happy and live
Brought my train back on the track of life
Just too exciting are these feels
This is what helped my wounds heel
Been tired of being in the dark
but I finally come to light with a shine
Now everything will be fineš„°
Its not just her smile
Its everything about her that makes me happy
She is just a masterpiece
All my problems suddenly flees
I wanna keep her happy and warm
Away from the bad nights and dawn
Everyday as I see her I feel enlightened
like my day has just brightened
She can be called a beauty or even a goddess
From heaven to hell nothing feels better
She brought me back together
The cutest thing anyone could ever find
Her beauty makes people go blind
Now I am always gonna keep her happy and safe
So that nothing could hurt her any-day
I will be there for her all long
Even if it means death for me in after long
The smile is killing me everyday
Making my life brighter and brighter
Love the smile and love the vibe
She brightens the whole world with just one gesture
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Author:
Dr. Dark (
Offline) - Published: March 31st, 2023 00:49
- Category: Love
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Comments2
The poem is indeed superb,
But, is the poet talking about the Sun?
But, the Sun comes under masculine gender,
Anyhow, if it is a woman, all the best!
I really like your interpretation of the poem while including nature but currently I am talking about a girl in this poem who has mended my style and made me a better person.
Each time when I loved a woman,
I imagined like this with true glee,
But, when they abruptly left
By totally demolishing my views,
I had no other go, but to forget,
Getting a woman of this type
Indeed is an extraordinary boon,
Best wishes to the poet with prayers!
Thank you so much for the best wishes and prayers from your side. Really like your thought but for the first time I believe some constant happiness has been brought to my life since this girl came. I really do believe in love at first sight and thats what happened with me. If you read my other poems, they all are about the unhealthy experiences I have faced even though I am young but do get affected by small things. Even after that god blessed me with such greatness and happiness.
May your peace prolong life long to help you write ever a happy song and may God's blessings to you two always belong!
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