Lingering

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  L. B. Mek March 31st, 2023 05:19

  thanks for sharing
  really like the brevity of your poetry
  indeed, so much abundant nature
  striving to remind us
  there's still worth in each gifted, breath
  yet weary eyes exist, befuddled
  by memory's painful live stream
  recollecting antics
  and so
  like most of modernity, we walk
  while scrolling, images
  removed from all that surrounds us
  and those opportunities
  to that better we dream of
  yet, fail to notice...

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    arialMarch 31st, 2023 05:26

    So true .what you said really resonates with me...thankyou for your praise and a generous comment..