Lingering

arial

The soft rain

 Its pouring...

The cold water

So tingling..

The smell of soil

Breathtaking...

But the eyes..

Oh nothing...

 

  • Author: arial (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 31st, 2023 05:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just an emotion
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    thanks for sharing
    really like the brevity of your poetry
    indeed, so much abundant nature
    striving to remind us
    there's still worth in each gifted, breath
    yet weary eyes exist, befuddled
    by memory's painful live stream
    recollecting antics
    and so
    like most of modernity, we walk
    while scrolling, images
    removed from all that surrounds us
    and those opportunities
    to that better we dream of
    yet, fail to notice...

    • arial

      So true .what you said really resonates with me...thankyou for your praise and a generous comment..



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