Fresh air

Poetic Dan

Learning to fly without any aids 
Emotions being let out the cage
Time is hardened then softened again
Walking dimensions to find a name

Seeing desire inside a flame
Smoke consuming every vein
Lost in a cloud puffing away
Sending signals to my brain

Yesterday's words is today's fresh air,
Letting it go so I can breathe easier!

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 1st, 2023 11:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: There's always a muse somewhere lol thank you
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Crystal Hope

    Yesterday's words is today's fresh air,
    Letting it go so I can breathe easier!

    such peace and beauty in this piece. wonderful job!

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend. I know its always down there somewhere

    • Neville



      Never doubt yourself Dan .. this is a little gem 🐧

      • Poetic Dan

        Funny how there always written and found under the most extreme times lol

      • BlessedbyGod

        Love this Dan, it's great,
        Just one little word or kind comment can inspire a great piece of art,thank you for writing this and sharing a bit of your personal life with us all, I feel blessed to read your work

      • L. B. Mek

        Brilliant!
        (I read and learn, wise Poet)



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