Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍
Folly
Just for the record
she seemed
to appear from
out of nowhere ..
In the uncertain
half-light
of a brand new day ..
And although
without question
or doubt, an enigma ..
She simply
would not have it
any other way ..
While impractical
of course ..
She was however,
more than just
perfect, in every
other conceivable way ..
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The poem is a celebration of the unconventional, of those who do not fit neatly into society's expectations but who are nevertheless captivating and worthwhile.
Good mane and thank you kindly sir
Methinks when perfection appears out of nowhere folly is often forgotten - - an intriguing situation in this alluringly half-exposed tale................x
thanking you kindly my very loveliest of Fays .. x
Ohhh, I know, KP aims to look perfect, but it's just too much botox! lol
poor you, maybe you ought to put your foot down with a firm hand .. 🐭 or should that be paw you, maybe you ought to put your paw down with a furry paw ..
Mystique won the......err......day, I'd say..........
on this particular occasion, you may well be write sir Dog 🙂
That is what an apparition is all about!
I think you might be under a miss apparition sir .. but ta anyway ...
Always am, N. It's a breakthrough when I get it spot on.
such an enigma
these words, that convey
a link to experiences n feelings
we though we'd long forgotten..
wonderful flow Hyung
I really like your conversational tone
(half-truth's, do so entice
distance, as life's enamouring guile
folly as fallibility's, cousin
we wink at one
so as to decimate, regret
with our wilful, smiles
and on
till that next folly, reveals herself
we only know two gears in life
'D' for 'dive-in heart first'
and
'L' for 'learning from our mistakes')
and I thank you yet again Mek for being so write ..
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