Dolos andApate did lie
Aphrodite and Jesus did cry
Even the gods die
Whether on a cross or tree
At Ragnarok or Calvary
To guaranty immortality
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sorenbarrett (
Offline) - Published: April 7th, 2023 06:57
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Dolos andApate did lie
Aphrodite and Jesus did cry
Even the gods die
Whether on a cross or tree
At Ragnarok or Calvary
To guaranty immortality
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What price immortality, at the cost of how we live? Dear friend I contemplate, and I thank you.
Thank you so much Bella. I so deeply appreciate your comments.
so true, dear Poet
similarities, a little scary
so many
of antiquity's myths and geniuses
martyred
so as to be granted posterity's
immortality..
(makes you think, what is acclaim
to a corpse's vanity
what is victory, beyond
comprehension's, breath of tangibility..
Time
as our aggregator of meaningful worth
yet we dream
in realms too far out of fathomability's
...reach)
Dear L.B. your poetic responses humble me. Reading them gives inspiration. I thank you for your review and most insightful comments.
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