I am in your presence
like the rose, red from the thorn
Every petal is a letter
signed in your name
I look up for your rain of grace,
I regret I don’t deserve
In your mercy I remain still
‘til one gentle breeze kiss
blushes my cheeks
I bend from the storm of shame
The stem breaks
but you restore without blame
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Good write P.
I truly appreciate your comment, dear sir.
I like it! May He "...restore without blame." us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.
Thank you dear sir!
getting to read a poem is a privilege getting to read one of your poems is a gift
How are you so wise?:) thanks for your kind comment -
I have a habit of writing them, then throwing them away .. I know each one is subsequently found and read in full each and every day ... well penned .. Gestalt would have a field day .. Neville
LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct destination-Gestalt is staring at an empty chair and it is not answering back, he he
Superb. Very touching.
Be blessed and many thanks!
Such a great poetic expression of what we should say to God, being unworthy of His immense grace.
I truly appreciate your read and finding inspiration in my humble words …
A bloom of hope. Lovely psalm
I’m grateful.
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