Love Letter to God

Parisab

I am in your presence

like the rose, red from the thorn

 

Every petal is a letter

signed in your name

 

I look up for your rain of grace,

I regret I don’t deserve

 

In your mercy I remain still

‘til one gentle breeze kiss

blushes my cheeks

 

I bend from the storm of shame

The stem breaks

but you restore without blame

  • Author: Parisab (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 9th, 2023 10:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: From 2021
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 27
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, John Lee
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  • orchidee

    Good write P.

    • Parisab

      I truly appreciate your comment, dear sir.

    • Accidental Poet

      Well penned Parisab.

      • Parisab

        I truly appreciate your comment, dear poet.

      • Peter Gates

        I like it! May He "...restore without blame." us all. He blessed you in the writing of this.

      • Parisab

        Thank you dear sir!

      • vividvoid14

        getting to read a poem is a privilege getting to read one of your poems is a gift

        • Parisab

          How are you so wise?:) thanks for your kind comment -

        • Neville


          I have a habit of writing them, then throwing them away .. I know each one is subsequently found and read in full each and every day ... well penned .. Gestalt would have a field day .. Neville

        • Parisab

          LOL-as to your daily practice, may it always be received by the correct destination-Gestalt is staring at an empty chair and it is not answering back, he he

        • Thomas W Case

          Superb. Very touching.

          • Parisab

            Be blessed and many thanks!

          • Gregoria

            Such a great poetic expression of what we should say to God, being unworthy of His immense grace.

            • Parisab

              I truly appreciate your read and finding inspiration in my humble words …

            • John Lee

              A bloom of hope. Lovely psalm

              • Parisab

                I’m grateful.



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