Stomach
Looking back at patroclus
My heart sinks
Sinks right into my stomach
How could Patroclus be feeling right now?
Hectors merciless spear
Sinking
Sinking right into his stomach
I couldn't bare it.
I couldn't bare it.
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Author:
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- Comment from author about the poem: from the book song of Achilles :)
- Category: Sad
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(I think you mean "bear" it ).... this was powerful.....
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