No Response - Daisie-Lyn Fuller

Daisie-Lyn Fuller

I’m waiting impatiently for the phone to ring.
Just on a random Friday night,
Praying you received my message,
Pacing the floor once the hours started going by,
And so I called you instead.
No response.

You promised you’d answer.
‘Just give me 5 minutes babe’ 
The blue ticks staring at me with dishonesty
Who are you calling if it’s not me?
And so I asked if there was someone else.
No response.

I ring your number once more, it’s urgent.
‘Just give me a second’ the message reads,
I don’t have another second to live,
I’m trapped in a corner, bleeding out.
And you don’t even care, leaving me for dead.
No response. 

 

  • Author: Daisie-Lyn Fuller (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 12th, 2023 17:02
  • Category: Sad
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Comments2

  • orchidee

    I thought I phoned you! (heehee). Was it me you were waiting for? lol.

    • Daisie-Lyn Fuller

      You should have answered my calls!

      • orchidee

        I thought I did. It kept saying 'wrong number'. Eh?? lol.

      • hpoetry

        I love this, the structure is interesting - how every stanza ends the same, I especially love how the penultimate line of the first and last stanzas rhyme with each other with that ‘ed’ sound (‘I called you instead’ / ‘leaving me for dead’) - not sure if that was intentional but either way I love how it ties the whole story together!

        • Daisie-Lyn Fuller

          Thankyou so much! I'm trying to change the structure up to make the poems different to one another and I'm glad you noticed it



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