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arqios

 

 

 

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  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2023 07:41
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this piece I got the message that we sould think about things before we put them to paper. That what we put down between those "undulating lines" casts shadows that remain afterward. Such writing should be uplifting to thouse that follow. I truely enjoyed this one.

    • arqios

      Thanks Soren for your visit and review!

    • orchidee

      Dang it! Spell-checker's gone again!
      I have to harticulate that it's a fine write!

      • arqios

        It's a mash coinage so won't as yet be available on spell checking apps. Thanks orchi.

      • L. B. Mek

        so true, dear Poet
        (we learn to grasp, for
        that we can't comprehend
        before we've learnt to crawl or fall
        then, act all depressed as adults
        for a loss, we can't quantify
        while beside us
        our treasures, are ignored
        devalued
        by their very presence, proximity's
        accessibility
        as a new wording of cheap
        in our warped
        decrepit notion of true, worth...)

        • arqios

          ...decrepit notions are the scraps and fumes of angst that propel many a heart and mind, and may as well be useless striving unless we employ them to our benefit and betterment. But that is just a thought of many that are out there. Thanks kindly L.B. You are most appreciated.



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