another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence's, peerless
wondrousness)
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
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another great shorty, dear Poet
(reciprocation
as our access, to soaring
self-worth
a half smile, enough
to empower our dreams
for a week...
how thirsty for all-things
sickly, mirage sweet
we all are my friend, still
....onwards, then
to that next breathless
bite, sip or kiss
in existence's, peerless
wondrousness)
Brings to mind the adage "stronger together" even in reverse together stronger. The nuances bring out the flavours to savour! Thanks L.B.
Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS d'un terrien en detresse where a person that feels detached from this world wonders what it would be to fly that the world might look more beautiful upside down.
That would be an incredible view soaring if upside down!
Good write CB.
Thanks orchidee.
How wonderful to see self-worth reflected in the eyes of another, and to embrace that self-worth as part of the whole which makes both stronger. Beautiful three line say it all!
You said it so nicely, thanks Bella!
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