Trapped Under Ice

Ok Waleed


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I am dumb but I know it and

at the same time I don’t know anything

I know what’s good for me, I don’t do it

  • Author: Ok Waleed (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 24th, 2023 11:43
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 10
  • Users favorite of this poem: Eugene S.
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  • MysteryGhost

    A great poem about self awareness. Stoatin Wirk!

  • David Wakeling

    I read this but I am left asking "Who cares"? It is not poetry

    • Ok Waleed

      You wouldn’t get it

      • Audrey A.

        I certainly read that as a jingle in my head.

      • 2781

        For the good that I would I do not:

        • Ok Waleed

          but the evil which I would not, that I still do not do!!!

          • 2781

            That's good news.

          • Eugene S.

            Ah, this made me laugh. The word play, thought play suits my outlook on things. Love it!

            • Ok Waleed

              Haha thank you. It makes up for the comment saying it’s not poetry.

            • orchidee

              Here's an ice pick - I will dig you out from under the ice!

              • Ok Waleed

                It’ll be a while till you get me out in the meantime read my latest poem on my poetic side, and purchase my books on amazon.com/author/okwaleed



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