Falling from Grace



each passing breath to each passing day

there's a mistake waiting to be made

I feel haunted, I feel torn apart

Crushing under the weight of expectation,

is my broken, tattered heart

I can't breathe

The air is collapsing around me 

The pressure is expanding 

All surrounding 

Falling from up above I say goodbye to the clouds

I loved.

Falling from grace 

Tears pour down my face

Forgive me god for being your 



  • Author: lisztmsv (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 25th, 2023 19:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem I wrote with the feeling of regret and past mistakes. Of my failures and flaws. I feel apologetic and acceptance for all I have done wrong. I wrote this poem as a message to myself that I don't have to attain perfection. In spite of that sometimes you just have to fall and not care what the world may say.
  • Category: Forgiveness
  • Views: 5
  • Users favorite of this poem: Marrow Mare, The Fallen one.
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  • The Fallen one

    You laid it all out there. You captured my attention, and not only did I feel your pain, you spoke to my heart. And I am sure you would many others. Many of us don’t identify or accept or past transgressions. Great read, great emotion. TY

  • lisztmsv

    Thank you so much for your amazing feedback I really appreciate your positive words:)
    More often than not I try to ignore the pain but on the other hand it demands to be felt.

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