Look at you,
buried in blue,
your blue eyes
closed forever,
when they
were made
for me to read;
The only eyes
to ever see me…
Now I catch
their spark
in everything pure.
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Author:
FallingAwake2 (
Offline) - Published: April 28th, 2023 22:34
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Very special-the 2nd thru 4th stanza could even stand on its own
thank you so much; I appreciate you taking the time to comment. this poem is for my past boyfriend who was just buried
Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched about how your words honor him
Sorry for your loss-I’m so touched by your poem honoring his memory
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