The Perceived Necessity For Three Precise Approximations
1) For a Poet Once Envied
how much of your soul
exactly
did you leave for your
muse to
feast upon and devour ..
2) For a Lover Once Loved
How much of yourself
exactly
did you choose to hold back
while I tried
to drown myself in you ..
3) For a Cause Once Fought
How much time do we have
exactly
for the two of us to devote
to a cause
we know, to be already lost ..
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Neville (
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A well penned scribble N, but I fear Orchi might be a little confused here. 🙄
I was thinking the very same thing 🐭cheers AP
OMG these 3 short writes are fantastic!! I especially like the middle one....It feels so deep and relatable. Great poems!!
Many huge thanks to you C .. make me feel good why dont 'cha
Such difficult questions you pose dear poet. How do we quantiafy Life's experiences? Does it go by day, week, month, year, lifetime? You have here a trifecta that is a feast for the eyes, a superb study of human nature in three acts. Love it, love it!
I am more than merely appreciative of this particular visit Bella .. I am delighted you alighted and felt comfortable enough to leave such a reasoned response .. Neville
Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
You at your subtle Best, Hyung
love this, wow so much depth
(I read and aspire to learn)
merci my brother ..................................... 🎶🎵🎶
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