my first impression, was that this little peach of a poem is very good .. subsequent impressions reinforce the outlined initial perspective .. a life's journey depicted clearly in the blinding light of a new never day ... Neville 🙂
a deep contemplative wording
of life's inescapable dissonance
a great write, dear Poet
'so quickly slips'
(that's that tinge of regret, imbued
in our experience of the now
we know, we'll be cherishing - long
after these moments, become
an aggregation of a past, we never
can claw back, try as we might
all we have is that snowballing, finality
we welcome, with dreaded anxiety)
Offline)
Offline)
Comments3
Good write CB.
Thanks orchi.
my first impression, was that this little peach of a poem is very good .. subsequent impressions reinforce the outlined initial perspective .. a life's journey depicted clearly in the blinding light of a new never day ... Neville 🙂
Thanks Nev! Most appreciated.
a deep contemplative wording
of life's inescapable dissonance
a great write, dear Poet
'so quickly slips'
(that's that tinge of regret, imbued
in our experience of the now
we know, we'll be cherishing - long
after these moments, become
an aggregation of a past, we never
can claw back, try as we might
all we have is that snowballing, finality
we welcome, with dreaded anxiety)
Some seasons of life journeys are far too short. Thanks L.B.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.