Are We Nearly There Yet

Neville

Are We Nearly There Yet

 

It’s at times

like this

I can’t help but

wonder ..

How many

more cheap

hotel rooms we

might

have left in us ..

And it’s

times like this

I can’t help

but marvel at ..

The length

and the depth

of our eagerness ..

But even

though we

each share this

hunger ..

We still have

our own

quite different

appetites ..

No matter tho’

how often

we might ask it ..

The same

question that is ..

Are we nearly

there yet ..

We’re not really

looking for

answers but

just marking time ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 3rd, 2023 00:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Dunno if we're nearly there yet. Where we going?! Do shut up Orchi. lol.

    • Neville



      I know where you are going if you are not careful ..

    • Accidental Poet

      'Tis the journey we seek, not the destination. Well penned my lyrical friend. 😉

      • Neville



        You are so write again AP .. thank you sir 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        A telling question your title here highlights dear Sir - - methinks after romps in hotel rooms with maybe a dram or two before play no wonder they're not looking for constructive answers - another intriguingly canny read ............ x

        • Neville



          Ta Fay ..................... n truly x

        • Christina8

          Loved this write! Reminds me of long road trips and adventure. x

          • Neville


            then my ink has proved of some value at least .. road trips and adventure are write up my street x

          • Bella Shepard

            There are those journeys that you wish would never end, and it's always the anticipation of the next one that sparks desire. Simply delicious dear friend!

            • Neville



              Delighted dear Bella .. absolutely my friend ..

            • L. B. Mek

              so relatable Hyung
              'thought provoking' to say the least
              a lovely read
              (distance, is ever a conundrum
              of our anxiety, status
              yearning to know our limitations
              we strive to measure
              knowing, we never want to realise
              those ending credits
              instead, by trying to concentrate
              on destination, we
              approximate the time we have left
              to cherish
              mementos of our life's effervescent
              sensations..)
              the films were fun as well, lol

              • Neville



                You got me feeling like an old apple Mek .. spoilt rotten to the core .. bless you my friend and then some bloomin more 🙂



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