This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
Thanks kindly. That is a much welcome response to the poem which I feel leaves the parameters of merely visual description but delves more on the possible internal and emotional tensions that could have come into play from varying points of view, somewhat a mash of stream of consciousness. Again, my gratitude to you.
The pomp and circumstance of the spectacle over, celebrations at an end, and now the future begins. Time will tell, it always does. Quite a thought provoking read dear poet.
'looping forward on
a midday pumpkin ride'
indeed,
not quite the Cinderella fairy-tale
I imagined as a kid
then again, apparently they're all
nightmare stories
'touched-up' to sale a reality, devoid
of accountability..
(a great read! thank you dear Poet)
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This poem was more interesting and authentic than watching the (real) event- Thank you for sharing-
‘blush of youth
contour of future scope
mourning sleeve still on’
I’m dreaming of a mire youthful future scope
Thanks kindly. That is a much welcome response to the poem which I feel leaves the parameters of merely visual description but delves more on the possible internal and emotional tensions that could have come into play from varying points of view, somewhat a mash of stream of consciousness. Again, my gratitude to you.
Thank you again, sir-The poem was definitely left for the eye of the beholder-and that is always an important ingredient.
Good write CB.
Thanks oc.
The pomp and circumstance of the spectacle over, celebrations at an end, and now the future begins. Time will tell, it always does. Quite a thought provoking read dear poet.
Thanks kindly. Indeed the future shall reveal.
how extraordinarily cerebral .. I very muchly enjoyed the ride sir ..
Cheers N.
Thought I'd see more written on the topic, but I guess that really says it all. Appreciate your perspective & well said.
Me too. With the queen's passing the poetry sites were quite filled, among other social media.
'looping forward on
a midday pumpkin ride'
indeed,
not quite the Cinderella fairy-tale
I imagined as a kid
then again, apparently they're all
nightmare stories
'touched-up' to sale a reality, devoid
of accountability..
(a great read! thank you dear Poet)
I'm glad you don't shy away from the bare details. Thanks for speaking out.
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