Did You Ever Dare to Ask
Did you ever stop
to wonder ..
Did you ever think
to guess ..
Did you ever even
notice
there was someone
in the
background playing
blues guitar
while both of us got
undressed ..
Did you ever once
consider ..
Did you ever reason
why ..
Both me and the sun
went down
on you beneath that
pretty
summer dress and a
perfect
cloud free, cobalt sky ..
So pray
tell me, did you ever
dare to ask
those most important
questions
of them, her, or him ..
Or even
my dear friend, of us ..
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: May 8th, 2023 01:58
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It was me playing the guitar - until I swooned at what I saw! heehee. Did you hear the crash as I fell off me chair?!
No, I'm colour blind
(it's scary to look closely
at our reflections
as in eyes, rest fragments
of reasoning to our deeds)
for some this will be a fun cheeky, read
for rest of us, it will be a sobering reminder
of those let down's and shameful escapes
we so ardently, repress
n forget..
but either way, there's no denying
this a great write, Hyung
thank you!
(you've spoilt my poetic sweet tooth
rotten, today
treat yourself to a double, double
of your favourite)
Salut! mi Amigo
🍻
Hope you n yours, have a lovely
Sun-kissed week
a double it is then .. Cheers & back @ You n Yours .. Neville
Love this sexy write.....so intimate and such a great memory (?) at the same time.....Wow, I'm blushing!!
and you have every write to too you naughty girl .. thanks C .. and so am I 🙂
Some might wonder, " Why question a good thing?" But without complete knowledge that thing can be misunderstood. Questioning, then. becomes important. Incomplete understanding can ruin a relationship.
A daring title, followed by the wisdom of a running question, leading to an obvious result. A most enjoyable poem and a bit of wisdom too. - Phil A.
My word sir Phil I feel indulged to the hilt and beyond this fine foggy mane .. indeed, my sincerest of thank you's, pale beside and beneath the weight of my gratitude, for the kindness you have shown me already today .. and I still have breakfast to look forward to ... Neville 🙂
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