Camber Powered.
Hello shiny loop of post-shower rainbow,
you of camber-powered striated halo,
and, so sages tell a sign of faith
to us sightless humans.
You secret keeper of much potted gold
in crescented show of arc-perfection
with brilliant mixes of richest hues
that break raindrops to states
of optic illusion.
Oh consummate curl of bow-creation,
who can know when and what day
you will unfurl with mood-alter
colour to soothingly bolster
monotone minds by your
own alchemic bosom.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: May 10th, 2023 04:43
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A fine write Fay.
More like 'His chariots of wrath the the deep thunder-clouds form' in some places, quite atmospheric.
How's Cornwall for rain? The rain is rather wet in our area - it usually is! lol.
Rain has not stopped for days here Orchi -- but the rainbow appears ;just the same - thank you for your read and your comment.
‘Monotone minds by your
own alchemic bosom’
I see you are enjoying and connecting with your environment by yourself-that’s always powerful and makes a poem special.
So p[eased you saw value in some of my lines here and how kind of you to say so dear Paris - --
aww bless you dear lady Fay .. that upside down multi hued smile in the sky was a rainbow after all .. x
Yup it sure was a glorious rainbow that day Nev -- a smile that wide cannot be ignored eh - hence my little tribute and glad you enjoyed it..............x
Lovely writing Fay 🙂
Thanking you muchly dear Violet.
What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other's as well. Especially liked "camber-powered striated halo." Keep smiling. - Phil A.
Thanking you Phil and sending you big smiles for this encouraging support of my little tribute to the wondrous rainbow .
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