Camber Powered

Fay Slimm.

 

 

Camber Powered.

 

Hello shiny loop of post-shower rainbow,
you of camber-powered striated halo,
and, so sages tell a sign of faith
to us sightless humans. 

You secret keeper of much potted gold
in crescented show of arc-perfection
with brilliant mixes of richest hues
that break raindrops to states
of optic illusion.

Oh consummate curl of bow-creation,
who can know when and what day
you will unfurl with mood-alter      
colour to soothingly bolster 
monotone minds by your
own alchemic bosom. 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 10th, 2023 04:43
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    A fine write Fay.
    More like 'His chariots of wrath the the deep thunder-clouds form' in some places, quite atmospheric.
    How's Cornwall for rain? The rain is rather wet in our area - it usually is! lol.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Rain has not stopped for days here Orchi -- but the rainbow appears ;just the same - thank you for your read and your comment.

    • Parisab

      ‘Monotone minds by your
      own alchemic bosom’
      I see you are enjoying and connecting with your environment by yourself-that’s always powerful and makes a poem special.

      • Fay Slimm.

        So p[eased you saw value in some of my lines here and how kind of you to say so dear Paris - --

      • Neville



        aww bless you dear lady Fay .. that upside down multi hued smile in the sky was a rainbow after all .. x

        • Fay Slimm.

          Yup it sure was a glorious rainbow that day Nev -- a smile that wide cannot be ignored eh - hence my little tribute and glad you enjoyed it..............x

        • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

          Lovely writing Fay 🙂

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thanking you muchly dear Violet.

          • MendedFences27

            What a hopeful and joyous poem. It will brighten my day and other's as well. Especially liked "camber-powered striated halo." Keep smiling. - Phil A.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thanking you Phil and sending you big smiles for this encouraging support of my little tribute to the wondrous rainbow .



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