Stuck

Bloodorange

A Single tear falls down to the floor  , shattering the the glass below ,  as fragile as the glass is my mind is  as well  Can’t seem to hold it together . I sometimes gaze into the darkness  , empty, hollow , alone ,  cold  ,  all my emotions gather as one around me . 


In pain drowning, gasping for air but I can’t take my next breath , it hurts more and more to breathe . I feel less and less worthy in this world (where em I ) lost in a dream of pain can’t seem to fine the in between from reality and my mind anymore. Is this a dream . 

 

  • Author: Bloodorange (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 12th, 2023 01:08
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • 2781

    Apparently our brains don't differentiate between physical pain and emotional pain. Whatever you are writing about sounds painful. Not the writing! Just the symptoms.

    • Bloodorange

      Thanks it’s hard at time that’s why I’m trying to express more . I’m not so perfect at poetry but trying to be . Thank for the feed back much love ❤️

      • 2781

        Touching on perfect I wouldn't know a prose from a stanza. Writing is far from my thing.
        Love is the key to everyday and it covers a multitude of sins.
        I look forward to your freedom x.

      • -Hannah-

        Your words are so easy to relate to. I hope you can feel free one day.

        • Bloodorange

          I hope you can feel free as well I read yours. And it was good as well so much love too you thank for your support ❤️

        • lisztmsv

          thank you for your carefully constructed piece. each word & each phrase barely touches the surface. it's meaning is far more than what many can express & you have done lovely in your expressions. i look forward to reading more of your works. i felt this pierce me deep.



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