A Single tear falls down to the floor , shattering the the glass below , as fragile as the glass is my mind is as well Can’t seem to hold it together . I sometimes gaze into the darkness , empty, hollow , alone , cold , all my emotions gather as one around me .
In pain drowning, gasping for air but I can’t take my next breath , it hurts more and more to breathe . I feel less and less worthy in this world (where em I ) lost in a dream of pain can’t seem to fine the in between from reality and my mind anymore. Is this a dream .
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Bloodorange (
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Apparently our brains don't differentiate between physical pain and emotional pain. Whatever you are writing about sounds painful. Not the writing! Just the symptoms.
Thanks it’s hard at time that’s why I’m trying to express more . I’m not so perfect at poetry but trying to be . Thank for the feed back much love ❤️
Touching on perfect I wouldn't know a prose from a stanza. Writing is far from my thing.
Love is the key to everyday and it covers a multitude of sins.
I look forward to your freedom x.
Your words are so easy to relate to. I hope you can feel free one day.
I hope you can feel free as well I read yours. And it was good as well so much love too you thank for your support ❤️
thank you for your carefully constructed piece. each word & each phrase barely touches the surface. it's meaning is far more than what many can express & you have done lovely in your expressions. i look forward to reading more of your works. i felt this pierce me deep.
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