Fay Slimm.




Time enters musing-land

with remembered blush of passion-schooling.


Mated scribes must bolster         

love that long ago wrote lusty twosomes.


                      My pen still strokes paired words                         

         which evoke rare amour, like his used to.      



  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 18th, 2023 03:56
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • David Wakeling

    This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know

    • Fay Slimm.

      Hello David -- Your visit and comment on Musing are truly appreciated - I sometimes prefer readers to add their own reasons for romantic heartaches but good to know you like a bit more intrigue to mull over and will keep that in mind for a next time.

    • MendedFences27

      Trying to write and your mind is occupied with thoughts of someone close , with gull actions as an omen. a beautiful piece of poetry. It reads smooth and easy and creates an image nearly all writers have encountered, the obsessed mind. Lovely poetry. - Phil A.

      • Fay Slimm.

        So pleased that your read brought such a lovely comment on Musing dear Phil - -- and yes the obsessed mind can affect every poet at one time or another.

      • hotidris

        Swell poem about you tuning in to fanciful musing.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Am delighted you enjoyed the read dear poet friend.

          • hotidris

            I'm glad that you're delighted.

          • orchidee

            Good write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thank you most subcerely for your visit and read of Musing dear Orchi.

            • Mottakeenur Rehman

              "Musing" is a thought-provoking and introspective poem that invites readers to contemplate the passage of time, the fleeting nature of relationships, and the power of imagination. 👌👌

              • Fay Slimm.

                Am really grateful for your thoughts on Musing - - You sum up the more important part of the poem and thank you for such a wise review.

              • Neville

                this is quite simply beautiful poetry .. simple as that 🖤..x

                • Fay Slimm.

                  And I simply say thank you Sir Nev. for your considered opinion on what I nearly forgot to post - -- mucho appreciated as ever............x

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