what is love?

jade_black

   love is not something u want 
   love is something you need 
   love is not something you have 
   love is something you carve 
   with every inch of affection given to u 
   and with every piece of affection u give
   its the warm hug you recive without having to ask
   its the warm pat on your head when u feel lost
   its not something words can describe
   so its important for the actions to pe precise
   love is me desperately wishing for it
   as i write this idiotic poem.

  • Author: jade_black (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 21st, 2023 07:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hope I can get some constructive criticism
  • Category: Love
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  • 2781

    Love is patient, love is kind. It doesn't envy, it doesn't boast, it isn't proud. It doesn't dishonour others, it's not self seeking, it's not easily angered, keeps no record of wrongs.
    Love doesn't delight in evil but rejoices in the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes always perseveres.

    Love never fails.

    • jade_black

      thank you

      • 2781

        It's true.



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