love is not something u want
love is something you need
love is not something you have
love is something you carve
with every inch of affection given to u
and with every piece of affection u give
its the warm hug you recive without having to ask
its the warm pat on your head when u feel lost
its not something words can describe
so its important for the actions to pe precise
love is me desperately wishing for it
as i write this idiotic poem.
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Author:
jade_black (
Offline) - Published: May 21st, 2023 07:20
- Comment from author about the poem: I hope I can get some constructive criticism
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Love is patient, love is kind. It doesn't envy, it doesn't boast, it isn't proud. It doesn't dishonour others, it's not self seeking, it's not easily angered, keeps no record of wrongs.
Love doesn't delight in evil but rejoices in the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes always perseveres.
Love never fails.
thank you
It's true.
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