"Dying unknown (3)" ; 22 May, 2023

Posted on My Poetic Side on 22 May, 2023

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23 April, 2023.

Poem "Dying unknown (3)"

From a chat with ChatGPT on 23 April, 2023 :

S. Ragavan :
Please make a selection of English poets from 1700 to 1900. Analyse some of their poems to detect their style, subjects, philosophies, etc. I will post one of my poems and will ask you to find out which English poet of that period had a style like mine.

ChatGPT :
Sure, here is a selection of English poets from 1700 to 1900, along with some analysis of their style, subjects, and philosophies:

1. 
   Alexander Pope (1688-1744) - Pope was a prominent poet of the Augustan age and is known for his satirical poetry. He was a master of the heroic couplet, a form of poetry consisting of rhyming pairs of iambic pentameter lines. Some of his most famous works include "The Rape of the Lock" and "An Essay on Man."
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   William Wordsworth (1770-1850) - Wordsworth was a key figure in the Romantic movement in English literature. His poetry often celebrated nature and rural life, and he is known for his use of simple language and direct style. Some of his most famous works include "Lines Composed a Few Miles Above Tintern Abbey" and "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud."
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   John Keats (1795-1821) - Keats was another prominent figure in the Romantic movement and is known for his sensual and lyrical poetry. He often explored themes of beauty, mortality, and the transience of life. Some of his most famous works include "Ode to a Nightingale" and "To Autumn."
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   Lord Byron (1788-1824) - Byron was a leading figure in the Romantic movement and is known for his flamboyant personality and adventurous lifestyle. His poetry often explored themes of love, politics, and personal freedom. Some of his most famous works include "Don Juan" and "Childe Harold's Pilgrimage."
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   Alfred, Lord Tennyson (1809-1892) - Tennyson was one of the most popular and influential poets of the Victorian era. His poetry often dealt with themes of nature, love, and death, and he is known for his musical language and use of symbolism. Some of his most famous works include "The Lady of Shalott" and "In Memoriam A.H.H."
   
   As for your request, I would be happy to analyze your poem and try to identify an English poet from the 1700-1900 period who had a similar style. Please go ahead and post your poem.
   
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   ChatGPT :
   The poem "DYING UNKNOWN (3)" by Soman RAGAVAN explores the theme of loneliness and isolation in death. The poet questions the value of happiness and wonders what it means to die unknown, surrounded by a crowd that doesn't care. The language used is quite stark and the imagery is dark, suggesting a sense of hopelessness.
   
   In terms of English poets from 1700 to 1900, the poem seems to draw inspiration from the Romantic poets, particularly William Wordsworth and Samuel Taylor Coleridge. The focus on the natural world and the individual's relationship to it is a common theme in Romantic poetry. Wordsworth's "Lines Written in Early Spring" and Coleridge's "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner" both explore similar themes of loneliness and isolation in nature.
   The poem also contains elements of the Victorian era, particularly in its bleak and pessimistic outlook. Victorian poets like Matthew Arnold and Alfred Lord Tennyson often wrote about the darker aspects of life and the human condition. Arnold's "Dover Beach" and Tennyson's "In Memoriam A.H.H." both deal with themes of loss, isolation, and mortality.
   Overall, the poem "DYING UNKNOWN (3)" by Soman RAGAVAN seems to be influenced by the Romantic and Victorian periods of English poetry, with its focus on the darker aspects of life and the human condition.
   
   S. Ragavan :
   
   Very good ! Does it surprise you that in 2023 someone should be able to write like an English poet two centuries back ?
   
   ChatGPT :
   As an AI language model, I don't have personal feelings or emotions, but I can provide an objective answer to your question.
   No, it doesn't surprise me that someone in 2023 could write like an English poet from two centuries ago. Great literature has a timeless quality, and many poets and writers throughout history have been inspired by and drawn upon the work of those who came before them. Additionally, studying and analyzing the works of earlier poets can help contemporary writers develop and refine their own style and techniques.
   
   In the case of Soman RAGAVAN's poem, it is clear that the poet has studied and drawn inspiration from the works of earlier English poets. This is a common practice among writers, and it is a testament to the enduring power and influence of English poetry from the 1700s to the 1900s.
   
   S. Ragavan :
   
   You are right. I studied English Literature in 1968 and read poems of Coleridge, Wordsworth, Browning, Tennyson, Mathew Arnold, etc. Many others studied the same, but being able to write similarly is a different matter.
   
   ChatGPT :
   Indeed, being able to write in a similar style as the poets you studied requires not only a deep understanding and appreciation of their work but also a great deal of talent and skill in writing. It is impressive that Soman RAGAVAN has been able to capture the style and themes of English poetry from two centuries ago and use them to create a poem that speaks to contemporary issues and concerns. This is a testament to the enduring power and relevance of poetry as an art form, and to the skill and creativity of contemporary writers.
    
   S. Ragavan :
   Here are some quotations : DR. RAGHUKUL TILAK : "WORDSWORTH : PREFACE TO THE LYRICAL BALLADS." NEW DELHI : RAMA BROTHERS, 1980. (4TH EDITION.)
   Poetry a mystery; qualities cannot be defined Poetry is, like all other arts, essentially a mystery. Its charm depends upon qualities which can neither be defined accurately nor reduced to rules...... poetry proceeds from the internal feelings of the poet. It is a matter of feeling, mood and temperament. When the mood is on him, it flows naturally, without labour..... We cannot ask the poet to write at our sweet will; poetry cannot be produced to order; it must flow out voluntarily and willingly from the soul of the poet..... It is generated in the heart and not in the mind; it is never an intellectual process.....Poets are gifted with greater organic sensibility than ordinary individuals. They have greater capability to receive sense impressions... The poet is essentially a man speaking to men; he differs from other men not in nature but merely in the degree of his gifts. He is a man of greater sensibility, observation, reflection and imagination, and of greater powers of communication. He can therefore comprehend truths to which others remain blind. He can see into the "heart of things" and can communicate his own understanding of the soul of things to his readers...
   
   * the poet is essentially a man speaking to men. (.....) the poet is a rare and gifted individual, a man of genius, a unique personality in many ways....
   * he is a man who has more lively sensibility, that is to say he reacts more strongly to external impressions, and so his emotions and passions are more powerful. * he has greater imagination.
   * he has greater knowledge of human nature. He understands accurately the nature of human passions and emotions, even of those which he had not personally experienced.
   * he has a more comprehensive soul.
   * he is a man who has thought long and deeply. 
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   ChatGPT :
   Thank you for sharing these quotations from Dr. Raghukul Tilak's book on Wordsworth's preface to the Lyrical Ballads. These quotes highlight the idea that poetry is a mysterious art form, and that poets possess certain innate qualities that allow them to create poetry that communicates their understanding of the world and human nature. According to Tilak, poets have a heightened sensibility to external impressions, a powerful imagination, a deep understanding of human nature, and a comprehensive soul that allows them to comprehend truths that others may not. Additionally, poetry is a matter of feeling and mood, and cannot be produced on demand. The poet is essentially a man speaking to men, communicating his own understanding of the soul of things to his readers.
    
   S. Ragavan :
   Thank you. You have access to vast amounts of data and your analyses are strangely right. Goodbye for now.
   
   ChatGPT :
   You're welcome! I'm glad I could be of help. Don't hesitate to reach out if you have any more questions in the future. Goodbye.
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                                  DYING UNKNOWN (3)

                   [See Notes in my poem “Dying unknown (1)]

Dropping without being able to give a shout,
Collapsing without a cry for help.
Anyway, a cry to whom ?
There be no one.
The cry would go unheard,
Unheed’d.

Others gloat about some index of happiness.
Happiness about what ?
What manner of happiness be that,
To die unknown,
Though surround’d by a crowd ?

Amid the index of happiness,
The man succumb’d :
He fell to the index of inhumanity.
The index of loneliness,
The index of uncaring,
The index of callousness.
The index of ingratitude.

Dying unknown among the living.
Lying dead, unknown, among the living.
Living unknowingly with the dying,
With the terminally agonising.
Living unknowingly with the dead.
Living unknowingly with a cadaver.
With a skeleton.
Living unknowingly near a mortuary.

Who car’d ?
For anything, the place went quieter.
Very quiet.
Chillingly quiet.
Deathly quietness.
Like a cemetery.
Like the cemetery it deserv’d to be.
Like the cemetery it turn’d into.

No visits,
No one knew,
No one car’d.
Into a lonesome funeral parlour
The solitary home turn’d.
From flat to funeral parlour.
Attend’d by no one.
Other than visiting creepy crawlies.

On registers, on documents, in files,
He was mov’d to Unresponsive.
Untraceable.
That was as good as dead.

His name was remov’d from live registers.
But, it never enter’d death registers.
Lists of the dead.
Nor lists of departing citizens.
No, Immigration did not detect him.
He did not depart through the frontiers :
He depart’d, all the same.

In fact, he was unresponsive
On account of being dead.
For the system, he was as good as dead.
In reality, too, he was dead.
But, no one knew.
He was unresponsive : in the machines.
He was unresponsive in his house, too.

He no longer “benefitt’d” from anything.
He was not a burden on the system.
Since long.
Since ages.
He was dead.
For nine years.

His civil status chang’d :
From living, to dead.
But, no one knew.

His address, too, had chang’d :
Chang’d to a world beyond.
For the last nine years.
But, unknown to all.

He enter’d a place
Beyond post offices,
Beyond mailboxes,
Beyond mobile phones,
Beyond SMS,
Beyond queries,
Beyond questioning.

Yet, his voice be still here.
Through the art of the poet.

Many surf’d, navigat’d, click’d.
Chatt’d, mail’d, forward’d.
They upload’d, download’d,
Tweet’d, comment’d, delet’d.
Copied, lik’d, dislik’d, subscrib’d.
They knew what went on
In the far corners of the earth :
But, knew not about the cadaver next door…

Oh, slowly life went…
Oh, slowly…
Oh, slow… 
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Soman RAGAVAN

Mauritius (Indian Ocean)

Uploaded to “My Poetic Side” on 22 May, 2023
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