It was pre summer,
I dreamt to leave the spot
It was a bummer;
When I tried to leave the slot
I roamed the corridors for hours and
I had no deal of entertaining my girls,
Then you came around like a dead end
Now, I want to stay here until time growls
I wonder if I could have known your name,
If I'd have captured your image,
It wouldn't have been so lame
My heart regrets for incapable of knowing you.
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Author:
chandana ocean (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I saw a person in a exhibition in the university I'm doing internship, I like him so much but due to my hesitation i didn't tried to know him , i regret it a lot. I tried to search in the social media but there's no clue , it was like love at first sight it was too sweet to forget. i wish i could meet person or find that person.
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Oohh, go somewhere else then - I should! heehee.
I must go , right
My comments on the poem "I wouldn’t have left” by Chandana Ocean
Unfortunately, your body can go anywhere, but your thoughts remain… It is difficult to get rid of mental pictures or mental experiences. They come back at any time. Having said this, you must still live your life. So, yes, you have to move forward. See the sonnet by Felix Arvers “Mon ame a son secret, ma vie a son mystere…” It is a unique poem, in French. No translation can do it justice. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 24 May, 2023. //
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Thank you for your comment,whatever you've said is absolutely true. I'll definitely look after your suggested poem 🙂
Time and vigour live within you.
Keep them ever in your mind.
While you still possess them, search
What was once lost can find you again
thank you for your courageous comment, it meant a lot for my hopes.
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