Technology/Mental Health


Technology                            Mental health


The age of stone                    Blame and revenge alone

The age of copper                  Possessed exorcism will stop her

The age of bronze                  Locked away as we carry on

The age of iron                       Lobotomies ECT pills now our enviorn

The age of steel                      No advancement still

The nuclear age                     Pills still the rage

Computers and AI                Nothing new to try

CRISPR                                Still chemicals, prevention not a whisper

Man and his invention          Still no focus on prevention


Why do we always wait to treat

what with prevention we could defeat

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 24th, 2023 17:45
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 6


  • orchidee

    Were crisps better in the age of CRISPR? Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.

  • sorenbarrett

    Depends if you like them CRISPR. Thanks Orchi for the review and technical comment.

  • L. B. Mek

    humanity's zeal for self-destruction
    incomprehensibly, inapprehensible
    is doing the same thing
    over and over
    and expecting, different results.”
    Einstein said it best, we all be crazy!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks L.B. in over 30 years of working with mental health I have seen little change. Like everything else it seems a cost issue. Thank you so much for the review and comments.

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

      Yeah tech has caused lots of health problems while making life easier. Iron snd steel age eh yeah man. Kudos for a great thought-provoking poem!

      Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

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