On a spring afternoon, the old capital, it's raining and keeps on falling
But many people form a line outside the shop, and waiting.
Through the windows, it's heard the brook is quietly murmuring.
The bracken cakes and warm tea, to weary customers, they're welcoming.
(24th, May,2023. Kinsley Lee)
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Author:
Kinsley Lee (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I visited Kyoto in Japan, and on rainy day, I visited the famous Japanese rice cake cafeteria, which is near the brook.
- Category: Short story
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Good write K.
Dear Orchidee
Hi! Thank you for your kind comments. Wish your weekend!
love your stylistically succinct wording
thank you! I love poems like this
'On a spring afternoon, the old capital, it's raining and keeps on falling'
'The bracken cakes and warm tea, to weary customers, they're welcoming.'
these lines by themselves, make for a delicately worded poem
Brilliant!
Hi! L.B.
Thank you for your kind comments. Have a nice weekend!
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