Stars are admired by almost everyone
Since each of them is just a mini sun.
They keep sending tiny little rays
Which reaches earth after countless days
The stars twinkle throughout the night
They seem to be so lustrous and bright
Although they are many miles away
Their light prevents travelers from going astray.
About the stars, many stories are told
Of how some hunters courageous and bold
Were converted into stars with different names
And earned a spot in the Hall of Fame
The passion to Star-gazer is often so strong
That some will spend all night-long
Imploring secretly to the stars in the sky
To come shooting at them, by and by
Admiring and clinging to the stars of their choice
These nocturnal people scarcely make a noise
They are a very peaceful lot
Who can stay glued for hours to a spot
The star you choose for yourself
Will tell a lot about you too
So stick to the one you care for
And it will be your constant guide..
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My comments on the poem "Stars” by NafisaSB
Poets are fascinated by sunrise, sunset, the moon, the waves, mountains and the stars. The special thing about stars is that they appear to twinkle. This adds to their mystery and their appeal.
You say “The star you choose for yourself” Thus, it is possible for us to choose one star. That star does not mind. It continues to look at us and to shine for us. We are not the only one to look at it. It still shines towards anyone looking at it. This poem is typical of how poets feels towards the mysteries and wonders of the earth and the sky. Your writings are certainly poetic. Soman Ragavan. 29 May, 2023. // https://allpoetry.com/Soman_Ragavan
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thank you so much for the feedback..
it is true that so many will hitch their destiny to any one star, especially the known ones- so they are there for all humanity, though we tend to believe they are our very own property
have a lovely day
A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read
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