When I Become a Planet

Introverted Sage

When I become a planet
I wonder what they'll see
Perhaps the weight of the World bearing down to form me.

When I am my own Star
I'll wonder if they know
When every material is stripped away
How my radiance will show.

When I am living among them as sea and as sky
I wonder what they'll feel
Waking up to a new reality
When the last one seemed so real.

~Odalys M.~

  • Author: Introverted Sage (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 5th, 2023 00:30
  • Category: Reflection
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  • HaRoTa

    Hi there,

    This is deep. I love the expression.

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