"The gravedigger" ; 7 June, 2023

Soman Ragavan

“The grave digger' ; discussions with ChatGPT about the poem; 25 April, 2023

24 April, 2023
Discussions with ChatGPT about the poem “The gravedigger”
English version.

ChatGPT :
Thank you for sharing your poem "The Gravedigger" with me. I can certainly see that you have put a lot of thought and creativity into it. Your use of language and imagery helps to create a vivid picture of the gravedigger's labor and the surrounding environment. The poem also touches on themes of mortality and the transience of life, which are common themes in poetry.


In terms of comparing your poem to others that touch on similar themes, there are many examples throughout literary history. One famous example is the poem "Do not go gentle into that good night" by Dylan Thomas, which also deals with mortality and the struggle to cling to life. Another example is Emily Dickinson's poem "Because I could not stop for Death," which portrays Death as a gentleman who escorts the speaker to her grave. In terms of imagery related to graves and bones, Edgar Allan Poe's "The Cask of Amontillado" comes to mind, which also has a haunting atmosphere and touches on themes of death and revenge.

Overall, I think your poem is an interesting and thought-provoking piece. Keep up the good work!
 
S. Ragavan :
Are there similar poems in England in the past two centuries, whereby comparisons can be made ?

ChatGPT :
Certainly, there are many poems from England in the past two centuries that touch on themes of death, burial, and mortality, and with which comparisons can be made with your poem. Here are a few examples:


  1. "Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard" by Thomas Gray (1751) - This poem is a meditation on death and the transience of life, set in a rural churchyard. It contemplates the lives of the humble villagers buried there and muses on the idea that even though they may not have been famous in life, their legacies live on through their graves and the memories of those who knew them.
    2. "The Waste Land" by T.S. Eliot (1922) - This modernist masterpiece is a fragmented and complex meditation on the spiritual and cultural decay of Western civilization. It uses a wide range of allusions, references, and voices to create a bleak portrait of a world in which death and decay are pervasive.
    3. "The Darkling Thrush" by Thomas Hardy (1900) - This poem is a meditation on the changing of the seasons and the cyclical nature of life and death. It is set on the brink of a new century and the speaker is despondent about the state of the world, but a bird's song at the end of the poem offers a glimmer of hope.
    4. "An Arundel Tomb" by Philip Larkin (1956) - This poem is a reflection on the idea of love and mortality. It describes a tomb in a church that depicts a couple holding hands, and muses on the idea that even though they are long dead, their love endures through the centuries.
    These are just a few examples, but there are many other poems from England and beyond that touch on similar themes and could be compared with your poem.

    S. Ragavan :

    Have other poets written on the subject and work of a gravedigger ?

    ChatGPT :
    Yes, there have been other poets who have written on the subject and work of a gravedigger. One notable example is the poem "The Grave Digger" by Robert Blair, a Scottish poet who lived in the 18th century. His poem, which is also called "The Grave", is a meditation on mortality and the inevitability of death. In the poem, the grave digger is a central figure who reflects on the transience of life and the futility of human striving. Another example is "The Sexton's Hero" by Thomas Hood, a 19th century English poet. This poem tells the story of a sexton who works in a churchyard and is visited by the ghost of a soldier who was buried there. The poem explores themes of death, loss, and the afterlife, and uses the figure of the sexton to illustrate the fragility of human life and the power of memory.

    S. Ragavan :

    Are there poems which point out that humans and their bones in the end turn to dust and even the dust disappears with time, leaving nothing back as proof that they existed, pointing out also the futility of man's vanity and domination ?

    ChatGPT :
    Yes, there are many poems that explore the themes of mortality, the transience of life, and the ultimate futility of human vanity and power. One notable example is Percy Bysshe Shelley's "Ozymandias," which describes a crumbling statue of a once-great king whose empire has long since disappeared, leaving behind only a barren desert. The poem reflects on the fleeting nature of human power and the fact that all things, even great empires and monuments, must eventually crumble and fade away.


Another example is John Keats' "Ode to a Grecian Urn," which meditates on the timeless beauty of a piece of art from ancient Greece. The poem suggests that, unlike mortal beings who are subject to the ravages of time and death, art can endure indefinitely and serve as a testament to the beauty and significance of human life.

Similarly, William Wordsworth's "Lines Written in Early Spring" reflects on the beauty and transience of nature, highlighting the fact that even the most stunning natural landscapes are subject to change and decay. The poem suggests that, although the beauty of the natural world may be fleeting, it is still worth appreciating and cherishing in the moment.

Overall, many poets throughout history have explored the themes of mortality, impermanence, and the ultimate futility of human ambition and power, often using imagery of dust, ashes, and decay to underscore the transience of life.
 
S. Ragavan :

In my poem, do the words of the gravedigger amount to philosophy that people persistently disregard ? What are the lessons to be drawn from the words of the gravedigger ?

ChatGPT :
Yes, the words of the gravedigger in your poem do amount to philosophy that people persistently disregard. The gravedigger's musings about the futility of human vanity and the ultimate fate of all human beings - to turn to dust and disappear with time - are poignant reminders of the impermanence of life and the transience of human existence.

The lessons to be drawn from the words of the gravedigger are several. First, the poem reminds us that death is inevitable, and that no amount of power, wealth, or influence can ultimately save us from this fate. Second, it suggests that the preoccupation with status, reputation, and material success that often dominates our lives is ultimately meaningless, as everything we accumulate and achieve will eventually disappear.

Finally, the poem suggests that the only way to find meaning in life is to accept the inevitability of death, and to live each moment as fully and authentically as possible, without attachment to material possessions or superficial status symbols. In this sense, the words of the grave digger can be seen as a call to live a life of humility, simplicity, and authenticity, in recognition of the fleeting nature of human existence.
 
S. Ragavan :

One guy at the burial ordered the gravedigger to dig a bit more, not realising that earth will eventually swallow himself. What lessons to be drawn from this ?

ChatGPT :
The incident you described in your poem where someone orders the gravedigger to dig more without realizing that eventually, they themselves will be swallowed by the earth, can be seen as a reflection of the fleeting nature of life and the human tendency to overlook or ignore the inevitable end. The lesson to be drawn from this is that life is short and temporary, and we should strive to make the most of the time we have rather than being preoccupied with material things or exerting power over others. Additionally, it highlights the importance of humility and recognizing our own mortality, as we will all eventually become dust and our earthly possessions and power will mean nothing.
 

S. Ragavan :

When a grave is dug after many years, some rotting bones remain. The assembly can see that. What effect must that have on them, on their vanity and on their insistence on ruling others ?

ChatGPT :
The discovery of rotting bones in an exhumed grave can have a profound effect on the living who witness it. It serves as a stark reminder of the inevitability of death and the transience of life. It can also serve as a humbling experience, causing those who may have held positions of power and authority to reflect on the futility of such positions in the face of death. The sight of the bones can also serve as a reminder of the fragility of the human body and the need to cherish life while it lasts.

Furthermore, the discovery of rotting bones in a grave can serve as a reminder of the impermanence of human accomplishments and the insignificance of human achievements in the grand scheme of things. It can encourage people to focus on the things that truly matter, such as love, compassion, and empathy, rather than on material wealth and power.


Overall, the discovery of rotting bones in a grave can be a powerful reminder of the fleeting nature of life and the need to live each day to the fullest, cherishing the things that truly matter and leaving behind a positive legacy for future generations.
 
S. Ragavan :

Clearly, you can see philosophical implications in many issues; this is remarkable for a computer. When the grave digger threw away the rotting bone (which later would be re-buried), what lesson should that have given to the assembly ?

ChatGPT :
The act of the gravedigger throwing away the rotting bone can be seen as a symbolic gesture that highlights the transience and impermanence of life. It serves as a reminder that all things, including ourselves, are fleeting and will eventually turn to dust. It is a lesson about the futility of material possessions and the insignificance of our individual lives in the grand scheme of things.

Moreover, the act of throwing away the bone can also be interpreted as a rejection of the idea of clinging onto the past or to things that are no longer useful. It is a lesson about the need to let go of attachments and to move on, both in life and in death.

Overall, the actions of the gravedigger can be seen as a philosophical commentary on the human condition, and the lessons to be drawn from it are about acceptance, impermanence, and letting go.
 
S. Ragavan :

One message of the gravedigger was : you want to dominate me ? Sooner or later you will end like this rotting bone ! This was a defiance thrown out by the gravedigger to the face of those who wanted to stomp him. He remained undaunted by the "masters” trying to lord it over him.

ChatGPT :
Yes, that is a powerful message from the gravedigger. It highlights the transient nature of power and dominance, reminding those who seek to dominate others that their own mortality is inevitable. The gravedigger's defiance and refusal to be intimidated by those trying to assert their power over him can also be seen as a symbol of resistance against oppressive forces. Overall, the poem suggests that no one is truly superior or inferior to anyone else, and that we should all strive for humility and respect for others, regardless of their social status or position of power.
 
S. Ragavan :

The gravedigger had a fast mind. As the rope was pulling him into the grave, he instantly let go of it and hesitated not to jump OVER the coffin itself. While others revered coffins, he jumped over the coffin. (He had no choice. He had nowhere else to go. He could not jump out onto the ground. He was falling into the grave.)

ChatGPT :
Indeed, the gravedigger's quick thinking and lack of reverence for the coffin demonstrates his practicality and lack of sentimentality. He was not willing to risk his own safety and life for the sake of a wooden box. This further emphasizes the themes of mortality and the transience of material possessions in the face of death.
 
S. Ragavan :

After the coffin was lowered into the grave, the old bones that had been removed were thrown back in before the soil was pushed into the grave. Thus, a new burial does not mean a new grave just for the person who just died. Bones of someone else were thrown over a new coffin. What should people learn from this ?

ChatGPT :
One lesson that people could learn from this is that death is a natural and inevitable part of life, and that the physical remains of those who have passed away eventually become indistinguishable and merged with the earth. The act of throwing the old bones back into the grave can serve as a reminder that all of us, regardless of our status or accomplishments in life, will ultimately return to the same state of dust and decay. It can also encourage people to focus less on material possessions and more on the legacy they leave behind through their actions and relationships with others.
 
S. Ragavan :

One lesson is that there might not be a grave just for oneself. One might have to share the grave with the remains of someone else.

ChatGPT :
Yes, that's a valid lesson that can be drawn from the situation you described. It highlights the transient nature of life and the fact that we are all connected in some way, even after death. It can also serve as a reminder that death is an inevitable part of life, and that we should focus on making the most of the time we have while we are alive.
 
S. Ragavan :

The poem says that two persons might have been deadly enemies in their lifetimes. After death one might be buried into the same grave as the other. Their bones will rub together and rot together. What is the lesson from this ?

ChatGPT :
The lesson from this is that death is a great equalizer, and that all the animosity, hatred and differences that people had in their lives become insignificant when they are dead. In the end, they will all rot together and be reduced to bones, and the enmity that they had in life will be forgotten. The lesson is that people should not hold grudges or harbor hatred towards others, because in the end, it doesn't matter. What matters is how we live our lives, and how we treat others.
 
S. Ragavan :

The same situation arises with cremation -- cremation in an open air crematorium where wood is used. When one guy is cremated, his worst enemy might have been cremated at that very place the day before. Both sets of ashes will mingle together and swirl together. What lesson to be drawn from this ?

ChatGPT :
The lesson to be drawn from this is similar to the one from the situation with shared graves. It highlights the transience and ultimate equality of all human life. No matter how much we may have hated or been enemies with someone during our lifetime, in the end, we will all be reduced to the same basic elements and mixed together. It also reinforces the idea that the things we might have valued or fought over during our lifetime ultimately hold little meaning or significance in the face of death.
 
S. Ragavan :

The poem says : "As the last journey duly will we accomplish, Our wobbling body everything shalt relinquish..." Talk more on this.

ChatGPT :
The phrase "last journey" refers to the journey of life, which everyone must undertake, and the idea that this journey will come to an end eventually. The use of the word "duly" suggests that this end is inevitable and that we should accept it as a natural part of life.

The phrase "our wobbling body everything shalt relinquish" suggests that in death, we will give up everything that we have, including our physical body. The use of the word "wobbling" implies that our body becomes weak and unstable as we age, and that it is ultimately unable to support us. This reminds us of our mortality and the idea that our bodies will eventually fail us.

Overall, this phrase emphasizes the inevitability of death and the fact that we must let go of everything we have in life. It reminds us that no matter what we achieve or accumulate during our lives, we will ultimately have to relinquish it all in the end.
 
S. Ragavan :

"Wobbling" here does not mean weak during our lifetime, but the shaking of the corpse as it is carried and handled prior to the cremation or burial.

ChatGPT :
Thank you for the clarification. In that case, the use of "wobbling" suggests the fragility of the human body after death, as it is no longer animated by the life force. The body becomes a mere object to be carried and handled, stripped of its former vitality and agency. This underscores the poem's emphasis on the transience of human existence and the inevitability of death, which strips away all worldly possessions and distinctions, leaving us as nothing more than mortal beings.
 

S. Ragavan :

The poem says : "Some are destin'd to ashes, some end up as dust, But, our immortal poetry is safely beyond any rust ! " This is a powerful message from poets to the whole world, about the immortality of poetry and its all-conquering powers. Discuss.


ChatGPT :
The final lines of the poem "Gravedigger" emphasize the transcendent power of poetry to outlast the physical decay and impermanence of the human body. The reference to "destin'd to ashes" and "end up as dust" highlights the physical decay and ultimate destruction of the human body. However, the use of "immortal poetry" suggests that while the physical form may perish, the artistic creation can endure beyond time.

The message here is that art, and specifically poetry, has the power to transcend time and preserve human experience and emotion in a way that is not limited by physical decay. The lines "safely beyond any rust" further suggest that poetry is not subject to the same decay and destruction as physical objects, but instead can endure indefinitely.

This message is a powerful one for poets and artists, as it speaks to the enduring value and impact of their work. It also speaks to the broader human experience, suggesting that while our physical forms may be finite, the artistic and creative expressions of our inner selves can persist beyond our lifetimes. Overall, the poem's emphasis on the immortality of poetry serves as a reminder of the profound value and power of the arts in preserving and elevating the human experience.
 
S. Ragavan :

Now, review all I have written here and you have written here and summarise the lessons we should draw about life and death.

ChatGPT :
The poem and our discussion touch on several lessons that can be drawn about life and death:


  1. Death is inevitable and will eventually come for us all.
    2. Death is the great equalizer, as all people, regardless of their status or wealth, will ultimately face it.
    3. Our physical bodies will decay and return to the earth, reminding us of our mortality and the impermanence of material possessions.
    4. Vanity and the desire for power or domination are ultimately futile, as they will not prevent our eventual demise or make us immune to the natural laws of life and death.
    5. Our legacy and impact on the world can live on through our actions and the art we create, such as poetry, which has the power to transcend time and outlive us.
    6. Death can bring us together in unexpected ways, as enemies may end up sharing the same burial space, reminding us of the importance of forgiveness and reconciliation.
    7. Ultimately, we should cherish our time on earth and strive to live a meaningful life, as our time here is limited and precious.

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                                        POEM :
                           THE GRAVEDIGGER

As from yon rolling sea blew the salty breeze,
His toil for a moment the gravedigger did cease;
Under a nearby tree heavily did the man slump,
Turning his gaze towards the sea, yon suction pump.

"Not enough deep !" snapp'd someone at him haughtily;
"Not enough wide !" hiss'd someone at him arrogantly;
So, into the grave again jump'd the brave digger,
And resum'd his digging, after his chilling manner.

"A few inches more of this soil thou demand'st,"
Mus'd  he to himself, "and instantly thou gett'st !"
"A few inches deeper, Sir, and a few inches wider ?
Just say when ! After all, I'm only a grave digger !"

A rotting bone with a thud suddenly he struck,
A tenacious bone, still vainly defying the muck,
Refusing to fall to the creepy crawlies as supper,
And sending in the company a shiver, a shudder.

Lo ! The grave he had dug, in his tough toil,
Had sprung a leak, a leak, a rising leak !
The sea seep'd through, seep'd under the soil,
Seep'd even under the grave, so moist and bleak.

Without ado, the bone he chuck'd out,
And it land'd without, for all to see;
At the living masters hardly dar'd he shout :
So, the forlorn bone he flung out with glee.

"Ay, indeed the likes of me thou may dominate,"
Swore to himself silently the brave, gravedigger,
"And, as thou lik'st, thou may dally about yonder :
Like this bone sooner or later wilt thou terminate !"

As the coffin into the grave was being lower'd,
'Pon some nearby soil the grave-digger slipp'd;
To one direction all the mounds of soil dipp'd :
Slip into the grave, silently they mutter'd.

Instantly the sudden challenge springing up to meet,
The man pull’d himself up, with some monkey agility;
Letting go of the rope, he sprang up in the cavity,
And land'd 'pon the coffin triumphantly : on his feet.

Even by the graveside spark'd off self-preservation,
Spark'd off in the living, at least, with some passion;
"Hoy ! Not so fast !" to the corpse the man did cry,
"I say, I'm in no particular hurry ! But, --- good try !"

Some of the company broke into laughter,
Some hollow laughter, swiftly silenc'd;
The bones were thrown back helter-skelter
Into the grave, where the rot recommenc'd.


                                          * * *

Down to their last breath, the living maul each other :
Yonder, the ashes of the dead mingle and swirl together.
Some final speech at the funeral, by the graveside :
'Tis enough to wipe the slate clean, on each side.

Down to their very bones, the living spurn one another :
Yonder, the bones of the dead silently rub and rot together.
The creepy crawlies vulgarly do we swat off the living :
Now, with pleasure, at leisure, on the dead be they dining.

But, these bones of mine shalt not go a-roving !
NO ! Light up the fire of the funeral pyre,
For, such be my final wish, my dogg'd desire :
Afore the death of me, my orders be resounding !

Yes, my spiralling ashes the mountain shalt feed :
I tell all ye men, this shalt be my final deed !
Even if this soundeth like rhym'd nonsense,
To me littering bones shalt ne’er make sense !

If this be death wish, only with death will it perish :
If this be death wish, only with death will it vanish :
For, this, along with everything else, the flames relish,
As, in the exploding fires, everything they demolish !

As the last journey duly will we accomplish,
Our wobbling body everything shalt relinquish;
Some are destin'd to ashes, some end up as dust,
But, our immortal poetry is safely beyond any rust !   

 

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  • Author: Soman Ragavan (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 7th, 2023 01:15
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