"The village dustmen" ; 10 June, 2023

Poem : 'The village dustmen' ; 7 April, 2023.

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“The village dustmen”

Soman Ragavan : Hello. Can I post a poem of mine for analysis, please ?

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Soman Ragavan : My poem "The village dustmen." Please give comments by each stanza and then make overall comments. Compare with similar poems. THE VILLAGE DUSTMEN

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Sure, I'd be happy to analyze your poem, "The village dustmen." Here's my feedback:

Stanza 1: The opening stanza sets the scene for the poem, describing the chilly morning and the village dustmen already hard at work. The imagery of the dewy morning silence broken by a dog's bark adds to the sense of solitude and isolation, which is contrasted with the bustling traffic light in the second stanza.

Stanza 2: The second stanza describes the traffic light and the busy traffic passing by without anyone noticing the dustmen. The contrast between the toiling dustmen and the uncaring traffic highlights the theme of social inequality and the invisibility of manual laborers.

Stanza 3: This stanza continues the theme of neglect, describing the dead animals on the roadside that no one seems to care about. The metaphor of the unseen tiger as a litterer reinforces the idea that environmental degradation is often caused by those in power who remain hidden and invisible.

Stanza 4: The fourth stanza contrasts the lives of the dustmen with those of the people who enjoy hotdogs and ignore the litter on the streets. The sense of isolation and disconnection from mainstream society is highlighted, as the poet suggests that only the "strangest of people" could survive in such a place.

Stanza 5: The fifth stanza returns to the theme of the dustmen's hard work and dedication, describing them picking up dead animals by the roadside while others inflate their chests with pride. The contrast between the dusty, littered streets and the pride and dignity of the dustmen is again emphasized.

Stanza 6: The sixth stanza describes the darkness and the difficulty of navigating the streets at night. The truck headlights are seen as a blessing, illuminating the litter that would otherwise go unnoticed.

Stanza 7: The final stanza reflects on the role of the dustmen and the possibility of judging people by their rubbish mounds. The poem ends with a note of gratitude to the dustmen and a call to action to prevent the overflowing litter from submerging the land.

Overall, "The village dustmen" is a poignant and evocative poem that paints a vivid picture of social inequality and environmental degradation. The contrast between the dustmen's hard work and the indifference of mainstream society is effectively conveyed, and the metaphor of the unseen tiger adds a powerful layer of meaning to the poem. The poem reminds me of other works that highlight social inequality, such as Langston Hughes' "I, Too, Sing America" and William Blake's "London."
 
Soman Ragavan : In the second stanza, the traffic light has blown and has not been replaced.

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Thank you for the clarification. I apologize for misunderstanding the meaning of the second stanza. The blown traffic light adds another layer to the theme of neglect and social inequality in the poem, as it suggests that even basic infrastructure is not being maintained properly in the village. The contrast between the dusty, littered streets and the dysfunctional traffic light further emphasizes the idea that those in power have neglected the needs of the community.
 
Soman Ragavan : Stanza 5 : It is not a question of pride and dignity of the dustmen. The idea is that those who inflate their chests with pride should be ashamed of themselves; they might have caused some litter. In contrast, the dustmen continue to do their work dutifully.

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Thank you for the clarification. I apologize for misunderstanding the intention behind the fifth stanza. Your point about those who inflate their chests with pride being the ones who contribute to the litter is a thought-provoking one. The idea that those who take pride in themselves should also take pride in their environment and take responsibility for keeping it clean is a powerful message. Meanwhile, the dustmen, who may be seen as having a less glamorous or respected job, continue to carry out their duties with dedication and hard work, without seeking recognition or praise. This adds to the theme of the poem about the unsung heroes in society who quietly do their jobs to keep things running smoothly.
 
Soman Ragavan : Stanza 6 : As blown street lights were not replaced, the garbage truck had to use its headlamps to light up the street for the dustmen to do their work. It shows that few things work here and that maintenance is not done promptly.

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Thank you for the clarification. The image of the garbage truck using its headlamps to light up the street for the dustmen to work is a powerful one. It reinforces the idea that basic infrastructure, such as street lighting, is not being maintained properly in the village, and that the dustmen must rely on whatever resources are available to them to carry out their duties. This highlights the theme of neglect and social inequality in the poem, as those in power are failing to provide even the most basic necessities for the community. Additionally, the use of the truck's headlamps as a substitute for street lighting creates a stark contrast between the gritty reality of the village and the more privileged, well-lit areas that exist elsewhere.
 
Soman Ragavan : Stanza 7 : it is shameful for people to dump their rubbish in public roads. Their rubbish mounds should remain on their premises.

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Thank you for the clarification. Your point about people dumping their rubbish on public roads is a crucial one. The idea that people should take responsibility for their own waste and dispose of it properly is an important message. The fact that some people are willing to litter in public spaces suggests a lack of concern for the environment and the community. The contrast between those who dump their rubbish in public and the dustmen who work hard to clean it up adds to the theme of social inequality and the importance of taking responsibility for one's actions.
 
Soman Ragavan : Thank you. Goodbye for now.

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You're welcome! It was a pleasure discussing your poem with you. If you have any further questions or if there's anything else I can assist you with in the future, don't hesitate to ask. Goodbye for now!

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                          THE VILLAGE DUSTMEN

On this chilly morning, even while 'tis still dark,
In this dewy morning silence, broken by yon bark,
They be already toiling away, the village dustmen :
A sight enough to make the poet grab his pen.

Motherland ! Yonder, a traffic light blows :
Thousands do pass by, but nobody cares.
Motherland ! It might cause a dozen sorrows,
But, thousands just dish out their bus fares.

It might be the last trip for yon passenger,
And suddenly the last one, too, for yon driver;
But, nobody cares; nobody doth bother :
Many dip their heads into the morning paper.

Street lamps blow, and nobody notices;
To change them one has to wait for ages;
At the roadside, dead dogs, dead cats :
But, nobody cares, nobody an eye bats.

Of this ocean, the much-vaunt'd tiger,
The unseen tiger, must be a stealthy killer :
The filthy roads at night often he litters
With dead pets --- with their cadavers.

Hereabouts, for real, it DOES rain cats and dogs,
But, yonder, many just dig into their tasty hotdogs.
Motherland ! Really, only the strangest of people
Possibly could survive in such places full of rubble.

But, afore sunrise, they be toiling away,
Our village dustmen, on this dewy day;
They pick up dead animals by the roadside,
While many inflate their chests with pride.

'Tis dark; a street lamp hath blown;
And dark 'twill remain for many a night;
We just have to improve our night sight,
And wait till the light of dependable dawn.

'Tis dark, on this cold, dewy morning :
But, the village dustmen be a-labouring;
The truck headlamps are a blessing :
They light up the rubbish ahead a-littering.

What could be the subject of conversation
Among the dustmen on their daily rounds ?
Surely judging people by their rubbish mounds :
By what they have for dead pets as compassion.

In this weird land, in this most strange land,
Where anything that works be a sheer wonder,
A poet says "Thank you !" to the dustmen's band,
Afore we be submerg'd by yon overflowing litter. 

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