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Nasty
Nonsense rain
Nailed the door;
Nourishing my inner beast,
Neutralizing the sweetness of today
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Author:
Pacifique Niyitanga (
Offline) - Published: June 11th, 2023 03:43
- Comment from author about the poem: A "Mirror Alphopbbet Poem" written when unexpected heavy rainfall broke me from visiting my beloved one after the long time no see.
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Great metaphors portraying the conflict between the “Nasty Nonsense rain
Nailing the Door” yet it “Nourished
My Inner beast” I found myself curious about a part II and how the conflict is resolved: Is the rain the beloved or the rain and beloved are also in conflict since it is interrupting an important encounter: so much can come out of this, yet it is a strong piece standing on its own: thanks for sharing poet friend…
sharing makes me proud. And comments bring self-love of my pieces. thank you, Parisab
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