The sky is clear
The sun is dull
The trees are still
As if the universe has stopped
Oh my love,
Your silence is killing me
Your calmness is creeping me
I don't know why
But i have goosebumps
It feels like you are a lion
who is still
before making a kill
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Very nice Mia.
My comments on the poem "Creeping silence” by –mia-
This poem is impactful. Though the sky is clear, the sun is dull. Quite intriguing. The trees are still and the universe has stopped. This adds to the intrigue and suggests an uncomfortable story. Silence can be a weapon that people use. The image of a lion waiting to pounce is a powerful one. Even the reader gets goosebumps…
Is it possible for you to send me a copy of that green background, please ? I would like to use it for my poems. Green is my favourite colour. Thank you. Soman Ragavan. 13 June, 2023. //
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idk how to send the image as it is suggested by the website itself
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